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Reviews for Mushroom Story

By : Latham02
  • From ANON - Emily on August 30, 2015
    Nice to see you aren't leaving Peach out of the action. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Emily on August 27, 2015
    I thought it was simply fantastic! You certainly have a knack for writing lemon scenes. I hope you plan on including a couple more smut heavy chapters into this story.
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  • From ANON - Ves on August 09, 2015
    Good to know that at least Luigi will be having a decent time in recovery! Been loving the writing so far, please do keep it up! Hitting all the right buttons for me.
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  • From ANON - Dan on July 31, 2015
    Once again another great chapter also love the double bad ending nice going there.
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  • From ANON - That other guy on July 25, 2015
    Am I the only one here who wants to see Luigi join the crew?
    He kinda deserves it, he hasn't been with Mario in any of the RPGs...
    If Luigi doesn't win, could he appear later for something, or at least get freed sometime...he needs the spaghetti...
    Keep up the great writing!!!!

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  • From ANON - Emily on July 17, 2015
    Tough call but I'm gonna have to go with Bombette since she's quite the bombshell (pun intended). Although I don't want to see Luigi stranded in the dungeon for the rest of the story. Maybe he could be freed along with the rest of the Bob-ombs after the Koopa Sisters defeat?
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  • From ANON - Dan on July 15, 2015
    This story is truly amazing I'll would give it a 5 star for 1 of if not the best mario story evey.
    I also like the bad ending on what would happen if mario did not all way win.
    And for chapter 13 I think I choose bombette for mario needs more power in the group I'm sorry luigi I like you a lot but i think a guy starving and got cot petty easy probale wan't be much help.
    But if you want the story to be more funny and have some awesome mario & luigi moment i say go for it.

    P.S thanks for choosing koopie.
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  • From ISkevuld on June 29, 2015
    Another great chapter, good take on the Fuzzies. I vote koopie because goommaria is already an outgoing character and I think we need to balance it out.
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  • From ANON - Dan on June 26, 2015
    I really love this story and for chapter 11 i choose koopie. Also sorry this review is so short.
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  • From ISkevuld on February 06, 2015
    It's really great that you are doing multiple endings. Lets you explore more possibilities.
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  • From Emily on February 03, 2015
    First of all let me say I love the concept of this story and can't wait to see what you have in store. I'd have to go with Goommaria as Mario's first partner since she seems more reliable and a greater help on Mario's quest. Also I was wondering would you be alright including a few characters from other Mario RPGs in your story?
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  • From ISkevuld on February 02, 2015
    I've been waiting for a story like this ever since I saw that mario thread at the mgu forums. You may want to also post it there because more people would be interested in it. As for the choice at the end, I'd probably be happy with either, but for the sake of the story I would say Goommaria. I feel like the other 3 would be better suited to an alternate bad end where they trick him once he picks them.
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