Reviews for A Change Of TacticsBy : JLDavenport |
Warning. Warning. Cuteness overload in 3...
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Baby Lucina and Cynthia dancing and more Cynthia love and Morgan whining about Ice Cream. Did I mention Cynthia is in this chapter? It is soooo close to Cynthia's chapter isn't it? Please dear Naga or Grima or whoever listens to these pleas, let it be close to Cynthia's chapter.
In all seriousness, even though I think that Loli lemon is a little iffy (especially when it is with 2000 Y/O dragon ladies,) this chapter is still worth reading. Because of the aformentioned reasons. Honestly, keep your pace, keep your process, just keep delivering quality content.
Also a Cynthia chapter.
Thank you for reading!
Man every chapter of this is a treat. I especially love how Robin's new instincts keep interfering with him thoughts and how he's kind blocking it out but not enough for it not to effect him
Well well well... Things are unfolding it seems.
I have no doubt Morgan's imagination will start getting teh better of her at some point. And Lucina, dear Lucina. Surely she could see what was going on with Cynthia, huh? Given that growing fetish of her, I can already imagine what she'll have in mind next, after feeling jealousy from Olivia.
And Nowi. Well, there certainly was no great plan here but sometimes, things are that simple. While the scene this time was not the longest, I know we'll be seeing more of her as she'll want to try new things and ways of doing it.
And while I wonder what the issue with Panne is, I need more info about it to state a theory. But I imagine it has something to do with Robin.
And now to wait for next chapter. I imagine the next girl is Cordelia, right? Gotta start moving towards Severa after all.
I'm....honestly of two minds with this chapter. On the one hand, HOORAY, NOWI! On the other hand, it ended far too quickly. Almost like it wasn't worth the trouble. I guess some people will have had some issues with Nowi, but it feels like trying to appeal to just their tastes blocks some of the potential writing you could do with her.
That said, hints of Tiki and a bit more of a tease towards Cynthia. Those are always nice. Though Lucina coming across her sister hugging Robin and Morgan finding that book of her father's hidden away, I have no clue what that could/will bring.
Another great chapter. I really enjoyed this chapter & seeing Olivia accept her feelings and seeing what happened after their first time. Personally from Awakening my favorites are Olivia & Tharja so I'm happy with the way you write them here. One question though is Robin going to pretty much have everyone? I think it'd be nice for him to do Noire while her mom watches.
Well, now we'll know someone who's going to be just squirming in anticipation if Robin brings out a chain.
At this point however, I must say my own headcannon is that Robin has to be somehow influencing them beyond what his tactics are doing. Sure, reading people and manipulating situations is one thing, but that kind of dream and desire is far beyond what he can manipulate. Especially when you wrote that even he was caught by surprise by it as we saw.
In fact, I'm wondering if the intensity of it all was maybe not a tad too much here...
And I suppose that if some are bothered by the controlling aspect of this chapter, then Nowi will cheer them up. The idea of 'controlling' and 'Nowi' together... Does not really compute.
(Seeing a new, Olivia centric chapter.)
Hello Gorgeous.
Anyway, not much to say, as per usual you are the best. Not much else needed, waiting for Cynthia with bated breath.
So we're finally getting Nowi? Holy Hells, YES! I can not wait to see her finally get her (canon) time with Robin!
As for this chapter itself, I found it thrilling (not that way) but also rather unnerving. Robin managed to enrapture Olivia to the point that she's referring to his future as being a king and she wants to be "enslaved" to him? That's some serious power he holds over her, and it was rather telling to see him shocked by him realizing as such.
Also, jealous Tharja is adorable Tharja.
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