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By : JLDavenport

From ANON - Chazza on January 02, 2016
Loving this new chapter. It fills in some gaps (no pun intended), and seals the deal with Lissa (and, to an extent, with Tharja). One thing that makes me curious, emphasized as it is here - why is Lucina reacting with such visceral horror to the idea of Robin being with another woman, when his other two conquests seem more than happy to share? I'm not asking in psychological terms, but with regard to the non-specific semen-based machine-washable branding Robin's harem seem to undergo. Is there something different about Lucina's branding, because she's the focus of his affections? Or an Exalt? Or because Robin doesn't want her to know and thinks she /should/ be horrified? Or is it just denial, considering how vivid those "horrifying" ideas were? Or am I overthinking it, and it really is just a question of the psychologies at play?

As far as first-generation girls go, I'm most interested to see what you do with Nowi. I always imagined that whoever gets revealed as Nah's father must have a lot of weird looks shot their way. "Oh, THAT was what you were interested in? I mean, sure, dude, she's a thousand years old or whatever, it's not illegal or anything, but wow, really?" In this instance, it's poor Donnel who suddenly found himself the subject of this attention, way before he had time to get comfortable with whatever he and Nowi might have eventually had, and it's driven him off. Even more frustrating for Nowi, whose choice of casual lovers is limited, to say the least, and who would find it difficult to achieve even a little intimacy after years of living as enslaved "entertainment", with friends who are all going to die countless years before you. Perhaps Robin, with a dragon's soul, could prove the exception?

As for the second-generationers... Noire is probably who I'm most interested in, after this chapter. I don't know who her father is in this setting, but, well... Oyakodon ahoy!
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From Cedricus on January 01, 2016
Agree with Mega :P

I wonder if Maribelle have similar feelings as Lissa~~

From what I can remember the most popular F/F shipping couples in FEA are: Lissa/Maribelle(honestly when they have lines like this in the actual game it's kind of hard to ignore it: "You are MINE and mine alone, and I am SICK and tired of sharing you!"), Lucina/Severa, Lucina/Kjelle, Kjelle/Severa(Kjelle drinks a truth serum thinking it's alcohol and ends up being very forward with Severa), Robin/Aversa, Robin/Tharja, Severa/Noire, Tiki/Say'ri, Tiki/Anna, Maribelle/Olivia and Sumia/Cordelia.
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From Mega on December 31, 2015
Robin, Robin, Robin, how can you be so dense at times... Noire is his daughter, isn't it? There was no time-travelling Lucina in that timeline after all. Morgan is from an unknown timeline born from this current one only. How can he miss something so simple?

And I see foreshadowing for a threesome with the shy duo as well... That will be amusing. And for the question you asked, who Lissa could be thinking about... That's obviously Maribelle, no?

I wonder if we'll see some Olivia in your next chapter... I do not doubt at all she'll be up to far more than dancing from now on. Miriel will be interesting to watch as well. Robin should be able to read her easily given it's easy to read her if you put logic as main priority.
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From ANON - Anon on December 31, 2015
I'd like it more personally without so much NTR but whatever
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From Cedricus on December 30, 2015
Going to sleep in a few minutes so I'll read the story tomorrow(yes, I read the comments first so I can think on them or any questions I have after)but about your Noire question:

Hey, if there was any character in FE who would be deviant enough to get hot from it and/or who would want her daughter to be there when she was "started" due to feeling close to her or wanting to make sure her sex education is complete it would be Tharja(and maybe Aversa when she was/is in her "Sexy Grima Worshipping Seductress Villainess And Robin's Adopted Older Sister" mode...still sort of mad every woman who joins in the second half of the game didn't get a unique child of their own).

I'll read the full story tomorrow!
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From Cedricus on December 30, 2015
Hmm...I wonder if Olivia considers Robin "her" conquest instead of the opposite? :) Could see her be a bit angry when it turns out she's not the first as Robin's "companion". At least it'll be easy to get her out of the office when other women are being seduced/turned, just send her to the theater for the night while saying Robin will leave after the last meeting with whoever it is. Her new outfit is pretty great.

Morgan, stop being the cutest and best daughter! The moment she discovers sex will be very interesting but I hope she won't be too corrupted by it in any way apart from maybe deciding to try out some other boy/man or girl/woman after dear old dad to test some theories or just taking off her soaked panties at some point during the day and giving it to her father to tease him. I truly hope her relationship with Lucina won't turn bad for an extended period of time after everything's discovered(I still want her to be there for the conception of "Our" Morgan as much as I want Noire to be there during the conception of "Our" Noire)since that would hurt. After everything she has tried to do to make her adopted parents closer I don't want her to be pushed away by one of them. :(

I'll go for Cordelia and Severa. Noire(I'm looking forward to hearing from her who her father was in her world) I've already mentioned and I want her slightly later(I'm looking forward to the "Wait, I slept with her for the first time just a few weeks ago and NOW you want us to try creating a Noire of our own? Why couldn't you say this BEFORE I made love to someone I'll be related to in 9 months!" So you agree?" "...Sure, maybe this time she'll get my hair instead of yours." conversation), Kjelle and Sully I feel like they require more set up due to their more...aggressive and forward personalities and Nah and Nowi feel a bit early.

It's clearly not because I've a fetish for red heads or girls with long hair or long twintails/pigtails...
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From ANON - FatalPhantoon on December 11, 2015
I'd love to see a chapter with Kjelle next, which means I'd also love to see Sully. I'm interested in seeing how Robin will address women more assertive than and different from the demure sweethearts and Tharjas he's bedded so far. I'm also curious about how he'd vary his approach, since Sully's loyalty and bravado are quite different from Kjelle's commanding pride.

Also, it's excellent to see you back. I was worried you had abandoned the fanfic.
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From Mega on December 09, 2015
Yes! Update! Maybe not much sex, true, but still delicious. And it's not like there won't be 'repeat performances'.

Going with Gregor a bit, I hope that little incident has him nagging that he may be doing something wrong. It's not like he's dumb, but he gotta realzie beign married mean you kinda have to make some changes to your lifestyle.

As for second generation pick... With Cynthia out and not counting Lucina and Morgan for obvious reasons, that leaves Noire, Nah, Kjelle and Severa. Let's proceed by elimination, shall we?

Kjelle and Severa... Both have their own pride, but in different ways. Kjelle has hers centered around strength and Severa try to hide how much she really care. While I can think of ways to manipulate that, the problems turns more to their mothers... Sully prefer think simples and would rather punch complicated problems in the face. A kind of simplicity that make manipulation harder. Cordelia... is like a powder keg. She had her crush for Chrom, she appear unsure how to deal with Ricken... Robin entering the mix without more experience would be rather dangerous. So I would wait for those two.

Noire... On the plus side, Tharja has already been done. Noire herself is more on the shy side and thus not so hard... But how accepting Tharja would actually be? Sure, I mentionned using hexes to help out Robin, but would she actually do that? She know what is going on, but that doesn't mean she can accept and do anything at any moment. I think she would need to come to some... acceptance about that situation first before Robin should try going for Noire.

And once it's resolved... hell, mother/daughter threesome?

And that leaves Nah. And by proxy, Nowi. Particular cases for different reasons.

What is currently going on with Nowi... Well, we would need to know more. Does she like Donnel? Are they both still platonic? I feel the main problem is the lack of perceived maturity from Nowi. I feel the guy probably got some stares when they learned who was Nah's father. The fact that there is nothing... We know Nowi is amongst the oldest here, but she doesn't exactly act as some may expect despite great insight at times. She's not dumb either. Does she WANT to be seen more as a woman instead of a 'adult kid'? Does Donnel wait for that before trying? Who know. But maybe that's the angle Robin could use.

And then Nah. In the group, one of the most starved for affection, I think. Her childhood has been very rough and lonely, forcing her to become mature beyond her years even if she can be as stubborn as a kid for things she want. And isn't that the thing here? She's serious, but most supports with her with others future guys has her try to seal the deal fast when she decide it's the guy she want. Insecurity maybe? And also open to pampering with food, judging by supports with Robin.

Now, peace is here. She can do what she wants... But what does she want now?

And on a more subtle note, support with F!Robin imply that with her manakete nature but preferences for quieter things, she does have a lot of stamina she get urges to burn. Now where could she possibly burn that outside of rampages? Heh.

And all this makes me imagine some kind of picture... Imagine Nah once she decide she want Robin. Unlike others supports, this is not a case where she can just call for a wedding here, given all know who Morgan's mother is. But she's stubborn, so what does she do? Give hints? Change body language to get him to notice her? Dress a little more provocatively just for him? There may be a fear of being shunned if she's too direct. Yet she still keep going because she want him.

And how does Robin react? Right away... Or does he let her stew until her patience is at its limits and she outright growl at him to take her? I imagine Robin would use an angle to tell her it's alright to want things and be a bit more selfish regarding Nah.

And thinking of two tidbits... It was stated that Manaketes can smell intent, which would have Robin need to be a tad more careful... Or ask for a hex from Tharja, I guess. And second, given lifespan. I would not think it strange for Manaketes to be a bit more open to the idea of casual sex. Just my own thinking, however.

And on a more curious note, I wonder how you'll handle Manaketes and Robin's nature in this.

So, in case it was not clear enough, I'll go for Nah.

Hopefully, next chapter is out faster than this one. Would not want you to suffer a curse where time between chapters only grow bigger, after all. I admit Miriel is not really one of my favorite... But I'm still curious where you'll go with her.
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From NightEye on December 09, 2015
Yeah, Nah. Have to go with Nah. Other than that, maybe Severa but for SURE Noire.

As an aside, good to have you back, mate.
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From ANON - That other guy on December 08, 2015
For reference, what this was supposed to look like, spaces apparently don't translate through the post.
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From ANON - That other guy on December 08, 2015
Was gonna comment on how good he story is, but reading the other comments and how long some of them are just made me feel inferior as a reviewer.
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From ToggleSwitch on December 08, 2015
Now this is the sort of manipulation that I've been waiting to see, and with someone he did not have any previous sexual experience with. I wonder how future plans will get, and how more complex they will be.

Looking foward to science.
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From ANON - Chazza on December 08, 2015
Holy shit, this is a good story.

On this website, that usually denotes a story that hits one or more fetishes and took the time to go through spellcheck, but no, this is actually really well-written, and I can't wait for more. At its core, it's a fairly generic premise - a male protagonist gets a power-up that means he's obligated to donate generously to the "Give The Entire Female Cast The D" Foundation - but you've actually taken the time to flesh out both Robin's own conflict over the issue and the specific, character-driven ways he's getting each girl to "fall". Even Tharja, who didn't so much fall as elbow-drop off the top rope. This is the most important component, because with Robin steadily transforming into NTR's answer to Light Yagami, my investment in both characters (that is to say, Robin and The Girl) hinge on his ability to believably and cleverly exploit their character - which necessitates they have a well-expressed character in the first place, as opposed to being largely interchangeable vehicles for Robin's throbbing cock to make their hips move on their own etc etc. You've pulled that off excellently, especially in this latest chapter with Olivia, and I can't wait for more.

Alright, that's enough gushing from me. Thanks for writing!
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From Mega on December 04, 2015
Well, I could not find a PM feature... But I'm here to show I still support you even after almost another month. Dunno if you need the motivation, but there you go.
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From JLDavenport on November 08, 2015
Hi all,

I don't know if there's a way to send individual PM's on this site, and I don't want to be the kind'a guy who updates a chapter that's just a status update.

But I did want to let everyone know, hopefully enough will see this, that I haven't abondoned this and the next chapter is en route. It's just a case of work's been keeping me absolutely swamped, between travel and training I haven't had a chance to touch my computer at all recently. Things are cooling down a bit more now and I should have some more time to start writing towards the end of this week, I wish I could tell you that I'll have the next chapter out soon after that, but unfortunately I haven't gotten much past the initial framework for it, so it may still be a while coming.

Sorry about that, but I do think this next chapter should be a lot of fun, hopefully I can get it to you as soon as possible.

-J
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