I've been with this story ever since the very beginning, and I've always liked how well written everything is as the writer has a clear love for the game. However, with the last chapter or so, I think I may personally have to put it down. Each chapter, to me,  has become more or less the same thing, over and over and over, and Robin has easily become an unlikeable character. The premise, or "reason" he was using for sleeping around, has been tossed to the wayside, and more or less just used as an excuse to continue things. The plot has become so one dimensional that I highly doubt any surprises or twists and turns, could really spice things up.

I am by no means saying this is a bad series. It's not. But for me, it lost its luster ages ago. But keep on writing, clearly a lot of people still enjoy it!

It's amusing to see Sumia's hidden depths, she's more than the pie lady. But things are certainly getting difficult on top of Hard.

And Chrom better hope no one finds out about his screw up.

In short: 

That's pretty good

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and another chapter for my favourite story, Picking up some traction I see. Patiently awaiting chapter 18 no matter the wait.

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Looks like things are really heating up, wonder what's the cause (his activities especially in this chapter, that envoy hinted at a while back or some other problem)

As for Morgan, the difference in figures isn't surprising considering how Lucina's mother and sister are both stacked.

And I wonder how much things will build up before Lucina finds out.

Nice to see this updated.

Finally some Morgan and Lucina scenes, although brief. I'm hoping to see more of these two.

I'm not quite a fan of Nowi, so I glossed her parts and went straight to Lissa.

I like how Olivia and Lissa came togeth, and Lissa's growing dominant and lesbian side. I hope she'll get her wish of seducing Maribelle in the future, something sweet and forbidden.

The orgy was indeed quite long. Though it was hot, I hope it doesn't happen too often as it's very daunting in length, that's just me though.

I hope Lucina gets some action soon, and more of Lissa's lesbian escapades.

Dude, Lon! Well meaning you may be, but FUCK YOU! That is not the way you handle this situation!

You deserve exactly what's coming to you.

I'm a simple man, I see Change of Tactics, I click, I am pleased with the constant one upping. I get sad because now I have to wait for the next chapter!

This is a terrific story. So much so that I am inspired to write a fic that follows a very close structure to yours with Robin. 

But it might get me some criticism since I'd be basically considered to be copying you. But I love Awakeing and Robin being the harem king is something I definitely wanna try. I'll try to make my side interesting and if I ever happen to post it, I would love to get your thoughts on it. 

And I'll definitely credit you for being my source of inspiration.

Hi JL! Hope you are still continuing this series! 

Since we've started to focus more on Robin having affairs with all these different women, I couldn't help but feel the lack of Lucina getting actually involved in Robin's affairs, just like that time when Tharja was blowing him underneath his desk while Lucina was in the same room. I would like more of those scenes actually. Maybe you could work some blindfold play in with her and another woman in the room, like blindfold her while Lissa or Tharja get frisky with both of the couples.

Speaking Tharja, I loved their talk with Lucina and she outright told her about the secret, though Lucina didn't believe it. Either way, what if Lucina comes to Tharja for advice on how to keep Robin satisfied? I could see it go down into Tharja manipulating and dominating Lucina. Maybe she could grow a magical dick and fuck her? Maybe even conjure an illusion of Robin and the two take either side of Lucina and have a threesome? Just some thoughts I'd like to share. Anyway, I'm waiting for the next chapter!