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Reviews for Smash Her Mansion

By : PersonOfDisinterest
  • From Dansama92 on October 16, 2016

    This story is very interesting so far. When is the next chapter?


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  • From ANON - anon on June 01, 2016
    Ah, should be interesting with the Captain coming back around...
    Can't wait to see how you write Lucina and Bayonetta.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 16, 2016
    This is great stuff. Glad to see Palutena joining the fun and hope to see the other Smash ladies soon.
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  • From ANON - rikku on December 03, 2015
    Love it! I'm rooting for Samus and Wii Fit together, but most importantly I hope that Wii Fit never pairs up with any dudes moving forward
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 08, 2015
    I've been enjoying this but had to comment on this latest chapter (6).
    The whole cotton candy experience was awesome. And I can't wait for the Jigglypants to be put into action.
    Just hope Samus isn't too done with this place.
    The three of them Wii Samus and Jiggy could take their show on the road but I'd miss Peach.
    Ok, four of them. More Peach please too!


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  • From ANON - TheGalaxyIsAtPeace on November 03, 2015
    A story of this quality seems to be a rare discovery nowadays, and a story of this quality with an author who is dedicated is even more rare. Although slightly disjointed on a few occasions, this has been a wonderful read thus far. Kudos to the author! Eager to see what the future holds.
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  • From mty14 on October 31, 2015
    You frequently use this annoying technique where you have something happen and then describe it to us through reactions or otherwuse two paragraphs later (Samus blowing Wolf is a weak but passable example). Then we have to go back and re-read the previous paragraphs while accounting for this just so that we can get a good understanding of what's going on, and it's necessary because I have no idea why. It's very jarring and takes us out of the story.
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  • From ANON - I Am the One Who Knocks and/or Reviews on October 29, 2015
    This is one of the best written and most entertaining story I've read in a VERY long time! I am greatly enjoying it so far. Looking forward to future chapters, keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - That other guy on October 26, 2015
    Ike: he fights for his friends.
    8/8 gr8 m3m3 m8
    Shulk is really feeling it ;)
    ...even though he has a girlfriend and is pretty much married...
    WHATEVER.
    Keep doing what you're doing!
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  • From ANON - anon on October 22, 2015
    Definitely one of the best I've read here in a while. Hope you keep this going.
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  • From ANON - vendo on October 15, 2015
    What about Rosalina and Palutena, and female Robin?
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  • From Blaak on October 13, 2015
    Please keep writing for this. Some focus on Samus in the later chapters would be amazing!
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