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Reviews for Under Tail

By : Latham02
  • From ANON - RRR on December 19, 2015
    Absolutely exceptional. Well written, paced and atmospheric, this feels like how the game would have been if it was an H-Game. I prefer the no mercy path, but hope you will do something about all the monsters following him, to prevent it from becoming cluttered. Perhaps some fore of hyperspace soul storage weapon? A permanent well of LOVE to draw from and a separate dimension to keep his conquests and ofspring? The only thing I hope you do in the no mercy path is to make sure Chara does not win. I played Genocide to fight Sans, and the ending where I tried to keep my soul completely undermined the play through for me. Chara needs to be stabbed with a real knife. As an aside I think Flowery/No mercy Frisk would be a good pairing, but any interaction will surely be hilarious. Thank you for writing and good luck continuing!
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  • From ANON - Billy Ruffian on December 19, 2015
    This is one of the funniest stories I've read on this site. Personally, I find the No Mercy version hotter, but enjoy the Pacifist version more as a story.
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  • From ANON - That other guy on December 18, 2015
    But what will Catty be called?
    ...On the letter from the shop.
    Is it a Perfect set up for a joke?
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  • From ANON - Godofchaosdragons on December 18, 2015
    Toriel should be next
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  • From ANON - That other guy on December 11, 2015
    "It didn't taste anything like pinto beans."
    "You noticed that this candy tasted even more like not-pinto beans than the last one,"
    All of the eye puns that I couldn't fit here (sans approves)
    "you weren't eye-sexual" Even in Genocide,
    And Blooky being Blooky.
    0/0)
    .^./
    This is why I love this story.
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  • From ANON - Ray_hyoton on December 11, 2015
    wow I love the story so far and the good is my favorite. Please update again soon
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 11, 2015
    evil version is better
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  • From ANON - zodiac on December 06, 2015
    I love the "pacifist" side for plot but love the "no mercy" for the sexual plot.
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  • From ANON - Mastermalee1 on December 05, 2015
    Please continue this im in love with it already also id like it if you could contact me id love to talk to the amazing author
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  • From ANON - OmegaUltima on December 01, 2015
    Love what is there so far, and am enjoying the changes you've made to how the game worked; Flowey being female threw me for a loop, but that's mostly just because I'm used to them being male from the game

    I sincerely hope you continue this, especially all the way to the end.
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  • From ANON - anon on November 23, 2015
    I love the no mercy path better than the mercy path but in the end I like both
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  • From ANON - That other guy on November 22, 2015
    *Sorry I forgot to name myself.
    That comment about the Skeleton
    Bros. is mine.
    ... Oops
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 22, 2015
    Wait...Was Blook the DJ?
    Anyway great puns as always.
    Also good luck with the skeleton bros. when you get there or else...

    *you're gonna have a bad time

    ...anyway...have a good one!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 22, 2015
    I prefer the pacifist path, but that's mostly because I prefer to be a good person. That being said, they're both good, so keep it up!
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  • From ninesenshi on November 22, 2015
    Pretty sexy. I generally prefer `no mercy' though the contrast is interesting. Hope to read more.

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