agree with the cuntness laras cucks are not the only guys with ball blues

still like the chapter

What "countess" writes sounds quite harsh, however, sadly I can't say I disagree with the gist of what she said... I enjoy your writing, I enjoy it a fucking lot actually, and I check this site just for updates on this and  "TR: Origins", however we are at chapter 10 of this story now and the "action ratio" is incredibly low. Having Lara be a tease for a chapter or two is nice, but no reason for YOU to be as much of a tease as she is.

Taken by themselves I enjoyed every chapter a lot because they are, no way around it, magnificently written IMO, but I am starting to loose hope that there will be a pay-off here, which in the end is the whole point of the site. You skipped the "break-in", which would have probably been one of the most interesting scenes of the story (Lara realizing she is literally fucked), then you write to the point where she is about to get fucked again before you skip to a time before chapter one, dodging the smutty fun.

In the end you write for yourself and if this is the way you want to do it there will probably be plenty of people who are going to love it, but I would really need a sex scene or two here soon... I will probably read anything you publish no matter what, I am too impressed by your writing style, but as it is this story is slipping a bit regarding its popularity with me...

EDIT: Just read your reply in the forum to "countess'" post. My review seems a bit redundant now, sorry

I started off liking this story and your writing is leagues above a lot of the writers I've come across in this community; but I'm officially tapping out on this story. Some teasing is fine -- but now it's just gotten to the point where you're just building and building and building only for it to never pay off in a satisfying way. 

And now there's prequel chapters as well? Gee. Because I totally didn't get the concept of Lara being a tease. I needed that spelled out further for me in a completely repetetive manner. /s

Like I said -- I like your actual writing; but I'd recommend making yourself an outline before writing chapters. One big tip for writing is to pick three things you want to make happen in your chapter and then focus on executing those milestones. 

But, as I mentioned, I'm officially done. I just find this story exhausting at this point. :( Sorry. 

~ Countess. xoxo. 

I need more. Lara is such a sexy cocktease.

[10] Love the missing chapters. That scene with Zip and the coffee cup and the facial cream is exactly what I'm talking about when I say that the guys should try to beat Lara at her own game. They really should make things even harder for Lara to tease and be unnafected. You could explore Lara slipping a little here and there and the story would be all the hotter for it. Wishful thinking, I know but one can dream.

The funny thing is that I like these missing parts more than where the story left off. I know my opinion is not on the popular side, but I really do think that your strenght lies on coming up with these crazy hot tease scenarios. It really sets you apart from other authors so I really don't mind seeing more chapters like the last 2, at least in themes.

Keep up the great work and I can't wait for next chapter.

Oh my god this last chapter is amazing. Exactly what I was hoping for. This is the reason I read your stories! Lara is perfect material for seduction scenes and some heavy duty blue balling!

Your descriptions are delicious and I could read a whole book consisting of nothing but what you've got going on in the last two chapters, especially this latest one. As I was reading the last paragraph I was thinking to myself how disappointing it is that it's just one outfit and it's over with 'and then she tried on a million thongs the end.' I was like, 'Show me goddamn it, don't tell me. Describe every last fucking thong Lara owns!' Maybe that would be redundant/boring to other readers, but I can read that shit for hours and I wouldn't get tired of it.

So, to sum up, I was in love with the whole chapter and everything in it, but felt it was a shame it ended so quickly.

Dat post script note tho!

Reading that was almost as good as reading the chapter itself, since it basically fixes the only problem I had with it and promises much more awesomeness to come!

Looking forward to it!!

awesome descriptions

dont know why people are so butthurt about this

author is great with words and the overall plot seems more reasonable and grounded than most tomb raider fictions on this board

Absolutely loved the teasing! I love when women, especially Lara, uses their sexuality and body like that. Can't wait to see what she has in store for Zip!

Will we see more from the 'current time', what happened after she lost consciousness under Rachel's ass?

How about this, a nod to 'Lara's Shadow' dlc from 'Underworld': to prevent being castrated by the wiz kid, A. orders Lara to revert back to her old self, and NEVER obey him, or anyone she doesn't want to.

She kicks ass, then gives A,Z a choice: get turned into her mind controlled sex slaves, or get their asses kicked daily.

Just an idea.

Well, so the castration-fetishists are back... 

Anyway, that was a masterfully written chapter. Lara was a cruel tease and reading about it was torturous, but in a good way. You really have a way with words. Looking forward to any new "Missing Parts" as well as a continuation of the main story!

"Alister dry-swallowed. His mouth was like the Sahara desert. His cock was like the Tower of London."

Good to have you back, was beginning to think we'd seen the last of you. Thankfully that's not the case, and the quoted passage is one of numerous examples of why I enjoy this story. Definitely think these 'missing' chapters are a good and probably needed way to provide more context to the overal dynamic between Lara and the boys, though given what she did to Alister I really can't think of how Lara can possibly make the tease worse for Zip. Either way I'm looking forward to you flexing your descriptive writing muscle in that regard. Top notch stuff.

YOUR PASSION!

IT'S A FUCKING COMEDY!!!!

CHILL!!

ALL YOU SPAZ MASTERS!!!

LOL!!!!

HONESTLY!

are you guys for real? this board is FULL OF RAPE, TORTURE, DEATH, SNUFF of tomb raider fictions everwhere and you complain about mind control? :D

SERIOUSLY?

LOL

Yep, you got me. I'm the good friend that occasionally rapes you. A man's gotta do what a man's gotta do, I say. But..'had everyone I wanted'...that is so something a friendzoned loser would say when challenged. It's like the virgin that immediately gives the exact number of women he's slept with so far (oh yeah, 56 AND counting!). Cool story. But what does any of that have to do with the two assholes and their prized bitch BoobsWriter so eloquently describes in his story?

Listen up white knight faggots, the bitch got what she deserved. Nobody's cutting off her labia and clit or physically mutilating her in any way, so why would A&Z deserve such treatment? She's getting raped and robbed, the equivalent would be them getting raped and fired without a penny to their name, no? That is, if Lara is NOT enjoying all of this in the first place. Shit still remains to be seen. And all you dimwitted hypoctites, aren't Lara's actions in the prequel sexual harassment? Wasn't she the FIRST to objectify and harrass her own employees (that she already has tremendous power over)? If you answered no, well nice double standard assholes. Like I said, if you are dead set on castration for A&Z, consider offering up your crotch area for a free kick to EVERY woman you happen to ogle and objectify with your 'male gaze'.