Reviews for Taming the RaiderBy : BoobsWriter |
Speaking for myself... friendzoned? NOPE. Had everyone I ever wanted. BUT seeing as you are AGRESSIVELY defending guys who resorted to robbery and brainwashing instead of skills... AND are being so harsh to their victim?
I DON'T BET...
I KNOW.
Oh my god you white knights are hilarious. None of you got what I said and none of you understand your own hypocrisy, why bother. Friendzoned much? I bet.
1648Why, if they only. see her. asan object of sexual gratification, would. they complain about her bikini? You're everywhere in regards to A,Z.
They are assholes. PERIOD!
She is PAYING THEM. AND knowing she gets them off, is dressing in ways they like envission her in. Her dress during her assignment proves it.
if gore is an issue...
Chemical castration. They get to have the equipment, just never get to use it. NO MORE BLUE. BALLING!
Problem solved.
THEY CHOSE TO STAY. KNOWING she did this. ONLY To control her as their sex slave... no other reason.
she deserves to be robbed blind and have her freedom and ability to act on her own impulses taken from her by two guys who are her employees just because shes hot?
by YOUR logic any woman who is hot... deserves to be raped.
Yeah they're assholes but Lara deserves what's coming to her. She's a bitch getting a taste of her own medicine, and I bet her sick bored rich ass cunt loves getting off on all of this (whether she's the one doing it or it's being done to her). People calling for castration are way off course and obviously want a good erotic story ruined by vile, immature, and completely out of place gore. How about you get a little kick in the balls every time you check out a VERY scantily clad woman? Seems fair if we go by your logic.
Gotta say, I enjoy Seductress Lara much more than Victim Lara, always have. So I do hope you write more chapters that feature more of the former and less of the latter.
1514AWESOME CHAPTER! CHRIST THEY HAD IT GOOD! WHAT AN AMAZING EMPLOYER!
ever been to a strip. club? ONLY THEY GOT TO GRAB HER BODY!?
WHAT UNGREATFULL SCUM! CASTRATION IS TOO GOOD!
Chapter reads like my dream job. So yeah... they are assholes.
Someone needs to stop repeating themselves. But that said... perhapse castration is too much?
Have to go with last guy.... they stayed to trap her, not teach her a lesson. THEY are Scum.
GREAT WRITING THOUGH!
as ever
they robbed her blind they chose to stay... so er... hell yes... they loose they loose their nuts.
Hey BoobsWriter, will you be continuing the story. Great writing so far!
... er, I. was refering to emasculating A, Z. After Lara is ordered by Al to service the guy who orders it; the 2 are gagged and clipped as Lara watches the whole thing as she rides, or sucks the guy off.
wooops.
YOU HEARD ME...
DO IT ENGLAND!
LOL chapter 4 is so hilarious. The dialog is pure gold.
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