Reviews for I Hate My JobBy : sandman-nobody |
Please update this, such a sexy story
Hey, Amazing story. I was just wondering if the story is dead or not. It really is an amazing work.
Just finished the first chapter, loving it so far.
Hoping to read more soon. Great stuff. I guess Miranda is up but would love to see Samara and more Liara action!
Wonderful story, and a fantastic second chapter. This chapter must have been the single best piece of ME smut i have ever read. I cant wait for the next chapter.
Only thing i could hope would be added, would be some inherent "loyalty" added by the device. Though that is simply my personal preference. As is, i would take anything for a third chapter,
Also if you ever get around to it, maybe think about the newly added Andromeda characters
Very good story, well written. Would like to see more Tali and Liara but looking forward to Miranda. Considering it's her main hentai attribute, I guess we are finally gonna see anal. It may seem weird, but I'd like to see a chapter with Eve, the female krogan. Hope for more soon.
this is fantastic and so well written . It's also hilarious in parts aswell . Cant wait for Miranda , one thing im suprised about it the janitor let anyone have a go on liara lol would of just had it so she was his 'relief officer' only . anyhow i hope to see an update soon keep up the good work
I just read the whole story - awesome so far! I'd love to see what happens to Miranda, she really deserves what's coming to her.
This story is pretty awesome. I wouldn't mind reading more of it.
I can say without doubt that this story is one of the best Hypno stories the site and probaly one of the best Mass Effect hypno stories if not the best one as well. Making the mind controlling element based on the Protaganist verbally bringing up artificial memories of the victim based on a pre fabricated customization implanted in the victims mind by the Protaganist chooseing was creative. Too many hypno fics lack subtlety and the gradual....corruption of liara and then Shepard to an extent is most enjoyable. The Protaganist has a fun world view too and the ambition you laid out for him involving Tali and perhaps Miranda as well as the other females of the Normandy gives your readers something to look foward too. keep up the excellent work.
Wow just wanted to say your story are incredible i really love the chachterzation you give them its amazing im really looking forward to the next update on all your stories have a good one. :)
i like this story, could you please make more chapters?
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