Reviews for The Price of HeroismBy : anacsadder |
Man, this is going to be a really interesting read. Porn with a plot, you know? It's just going to be so cool to read peach eventually getting to trust them both, and, if she's actually going to fall for it.
The sex scene was very well written- realistic, and it really draws you into it. You write it really well, man! I can't wait for the next update to any of your stories!
I enjoyed it greatly! I love the twist you put at the end of the story, perfect. I have always been a fan of Waluigi, he is just a sly clever guy! Anyway, I do hope you will continue this storyline, it was indeed intriqguing; I actually read ot twice in one day. Please continue. I am interested of what will happen when the princess wakes up. Also, I love how you threw in stockholm syndrome. Priceless!! That was what I was thinking Waluigi was doing when he insisted on walking her to here room. NICE TOUCH!
If you do, please contact me so I can follow your works.
P.S I enjoyed, "Waluigi Always Wins".
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