Reviews for Joma gets a MegaBy : Fanfictionfan360 |
Ok, wow. That was wonderful 😍😍😍
Little does Joma know, Gale has her own mega bracelet, which she would be more than willing to share ;-3
speaking of sharing, once ocean comes of age, Gardevoir should let her shiny daughter show off her dress in Mega Form...on a pole ;-3
ibts
More desk sex, yummy! Gardevoir is such a sexy Pokemon, and a definite favourite of Mike and mine. Seeing the Psychic Pokemon getting bent over a desk and fucked up the ass has made me really horny, so guess you did your job ;)
-Ace
Not a bad fic, short, to the point, a bit hot, could be more descriptive, i felt the lucario was funny but in a very juvinal sense. It would of been better to have that be part of a grander story where we know more about Joma the gardevoir and lucario, just seting up a random smut scene involving a trainer and his gardevoir doesn't really need such a random side track to another pokemon.
This is amazing man. Great job!
I also really liked the part about Lucario hearing what joma and Gardevoir were doing. It was so funny.
I think your stories are all becoming too similar lately. You were improving so quickly on building characters and setting a scene, and having a variety of kinds of sex scenes. but now every story is just a blurb of set up followed by skull fucking and violent sex. Every single story in every single category with every single character, just skull fucking and violent sex.
I hope you can get past this and go back to evolving as a writer soon.
Strangely, I don't mind male pokemon fucking human sluts but I think it's weird for a male human t fuck a female pokemon O.o
I want one XD
-Ferklez
Simply Amazing. Nothing else can be said except, holy shit, this is AMAZING
Thank you so much m8, this really means a lot to me
JMA
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