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Reviews for Island retreat

By : Fanfictionfan360
  • From IttyBittySkitty on April 26, 2020

    Not sure who the girl is or pretty much who any of the Pokémon are, but vacation sex is one of the best kinds ;-)

    ibts


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  • From Midnight-Smut-Writer on December 29, 2017

    An erotic tale of trainer and pokemon bonding. Trully a hot story! 


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  • From The_Desert_Dancer on January 15, 2017

    Nice to see some love given to Sun and Moon. Selene is such a whore, going down on three Pokemon. The Kommo-o shoving it's cock up Selene's ass was pretty sexy. Also loved everything with Lycanroc.

     

    -Ace


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  • From ANON - Shaitan on December 31, 2016

    Awesome to see some sun and moon fics. Please write more, especially Lillie who strikes me as a major sub

    on that note I had a suggestion for a fic sorta like your old leaf green series. It would have star the male character, Elios (think that's his name), a dom, who travels the island doing all the woman he comes across. Along the way, he meets the super submissive Lillie who can't say no to any request and get pretty much used by everyone (the professor, Pokemon, the main character, hau, a combination of everyone). Maybe she protests a little bit but gives in if anyone is pushy. I'm get the sense she would be less slutty like Leaf and more niave. Normally I'd say make it about her, but I think several of the normal female trainers you run into would make great smut characters (always had a thing for the tan girls) and so want to see them getting dominated by a male human

    Probably wouldn't want it to be too long maybe only first island. Of course if you choose to not do it I totally understand, just find your stuff so hot that I wanted to see this idea done by you. Thanks for reading my suggestion and keep up the good work. I like all your fics. Almost every fandom you do I love and I am a big fan of oral which you seem to use heavily. Was very happy to get hp, digimon, code lyoko (so hard to find), and rwby in one place. I'd love some more smutty straigh  rwby if at all possibly too. Rather than just the more serious ones you put out now

     

    p.s. Can we get your old twilight fics back up? little red riding Nessie was sooooo hot


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  • From ANON - Shen's General on December 07, 2016

    Hey, it's me, Shen's General.

     

    This story was pretty nice... though I feel there could had been a bit more detail. Like more descriptions of Selene's body (help people paint picture of what she looks like, since some may not know who Selene is).

     

    And maybe the sex could had been longer.

     

    But overall, the story was not bad.


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  • From ANON - Ynk on December 07, 2016

    Bunch of pokesluts! Cool!


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