Reviews for AcheBy : Fanfictionfan360 |
Oh my lord...
very nice.
very nice.
Sexy stuff. Good dialog. Though I'm pretty sure Joel was nailing the woman he partnered with when he met Ellie.
So this was fun to read. I love the protector turned object of desire. It was fairly well paced and gave me a sense of what I thought would have happened after the game. I expect to see some more of Ellie and Joel!
-GB :)
This one was good m8.
Always loved this game. ( That ending killed my emotions ;-;)
You should write another one with Ellie.
Pretty good story here. I've never really played Last of Us, so this is kind of my introduction into the series. These was really hot, and I can't wait to see way else you'll write. Good job!
Someone's pretty excited for last of us 2. 😉
this was hot as hell!
nicely in character too
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