Reviews for Grima's PetsBy : KratosAurion97 |
Always great to see another update, really like the way you went with Nah too. You've got something of a good mix with the girls and their motivations here I think, some are far more accepting of others.
It's all fairly simple and straightforward and personally I'm not really into Grima and like how everyone refers to him as Robin, I'm trying to believe it's more of a corrupted Robin rather than actually just Grima... Despite the comments in the previous chapter, but it's a fun ride regardless and you're doing well to keep with such a regular update cycle.
Always glad to see this continuing and a whole lott'a fun with this chapter and all the girls introduced... Except for the part about Cherche getting raped by some random bandit. Completely personal taste, but that's really not up my alley and put me off quite a bit, it's very different from what the setup for the rest of the chapters have been so far, felt like a pretty big tonal shift- I kept expecting Robin/Grima to intervene, before it was too late.
So, hoping that's not gonna be a continuing thing, and we're not also gonna end up in a situation where he ends up whoring his woman out, as you sometimes see with these kind'a things.
Again, just personal taste, but I thought I'd give some feedback.
In other news, have you considered posting this on Archive of our Own? You'll probably get more feedback/views that way, it's busier than this site.
Bravo, I say. Keep up the good work.
Great to see you're still going with this, not sure why you're not getting many reviews, but it's a story I enjoy seeing updated for sure.
I've been really enjoying this, hopefully you continue it.
Nice work so far, can't wait to see which female FEA character comes next. :D
Personally I think Grima should keep Cynthia, without Lucina knowing at first, and Lissa, as his pets too, so that Exalt bloodine would no longer be a threat to him in the future. that and maybe as a screw you to Naga.
plus don't forget Tharja, she'd probably would jump at the chance at being Robin/Grima's slave.
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