Reviews for Hate is Love Spelled Backwards and WrongBy : RotSeele |
Wow, I must say this short little story is really well written. It is obvious that you know quite a bit about the two characters, and though with a darker mood to it with the picture in ones mind of Argus looming above, the little quips of humor were done so seamlessly. I'm also rather glad that it didn't really turn into something overly raunchy or just some meaningless sex scene with no story. Over all you portrayed the two characters really well friend, it almost felt like something that could and would happen between the two. You've given two characters from a fictional world even more personality and made it rather easy to connect with them and understand them even in the single chapter that you've written. Thank you for this impressive piece of literary art. I would love to see more pieces from you done with such skillful execution. Once again you have done an amazing job with this, shall I say, short story. Wether or not you plan to continue it I cannot tell, but you really have excelled at capturing the characters in this scene.
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