Reviews for A Dish Best Served ColdBy : theoctohat & theoctohat |
When is the next chapter
I really liked the variety between the chapters on this.
In part one the whole "A little higher," bit that was amazing, I don't know quite why but it really works.
In part two, well, the whole giant and tiny fetish kind've passed me by but your descriptions of him stuck down there and playing with her still really conjured up the images for me. Pretty funny thought of her frustrated at the end as he escapes, too.
Part three, just some good old fashioned oral loving!
I see this is your only story on AFF - I hope that this just means you're writing and posting elsewhere and haven't stopped, because you're very talented at this stuff.
Looks like merula likes being treated as the object instead
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