Reviews for A Chance EncounterBy : Revenant |
Chap 7 was sexy fun. Good to see another chap after quite some time.
Hey, really love your story! I can't wait to read more of it :)
It's not often I skim through these stories and find one that I really like, let alone bookmark to revisit... Great work!
Well, this story is fun. I was curious how you were going to get these two together into sexy-times, but it worked.
Your writing is great. I enjoyed all the humorous and evocative similes. Also, "Jenny tails" made me laugh.
Chapter 6 seems like a bit of a throw-away, though. The house building was sort of plodding and out of character (or at least the dramatic shift in outlook needed more time to build), and the tie up of loose ends with Roderick felt rushed. Is that the last chapter?
Anyway, this was entertaining through and though, and the sex was a good payoff for waiting several chapters. :P
Loved chapter 5, hoping for more.
Chap 5, glad they finally made love. Sexy scene. I hope this works out for them and Will does not ruin it all doing something foolish.
Really enjoying the interaction between the two. Can't wait for chapter 5.
I get that you're building up, but I hope we get to the erotic stuff soon. Pretty well written.
Really enjoying the story so far. Looking forward to learning more about Kelrynn and William.
Nice way to start off. Keep going!
Decent start. What happens next?
Interesting start, looking forward to more!
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