Reviews for Warchief With BenefitsBy : ItsJessy |
This is a long overdue review for you, so without further ado, let's get on with it.... my rhymes suck.
I pretty much love your description of Sylvanas, as well as the Dark Rangers that serve as her personal guard. Despite her rather playful enthusiasm for greeting the new champions of the Horde, Sylvanas sort of comes across as the stern, malicious leader she is, while still serving as an undead goddess of beauty and vanity. Just this alone makes it so much more enjoyable to read the story.
If that was all there was to it, I'd be pretty happy. But no, it only gets better as you read on. You have a pretty good grasp around the more sexual aspect of the story, in the sense that it has a good transition from the introduction to the main dish. Sylvanas comes off as a strong Warchief, but one capable of having some fun when there's time. I'll honestly say that the intermission of the Dark Rangers is a good one, and one you should definitely continue having.
All in all? I'd say this is a pretty good story, cutting straight to the chase without any milling about. I definitely look forward to reading more from you, both past and future content.
While AFF and its agents attempt to remove all illegal works from the site as quickly and thoroughly as possible, there is always the possibility that some submissions may be overlooked or dismissed in error. The AFF system includes a rigorous and complex abuse control system in order to prevent improper use of the AFF service, and we hope that its deployment indicates a good-faith effort to eliminate any illegal material on the site in a fair and unbiased manner. This abuse control system is run in accordance with the strict guidelines specified above.
All works displayed here, whether pictorial or literary, are the property of their owners and not Adult-FanFiction.org. Opinions stated in profiles of users may not reflect the opinions or views of Adult-FanFiction.org or any of its owners, agents, or related entities.
Website Domain ©2002-2017 by Apollo. PHP scripting, CSS style sheets, Database layout & Original artwork ©2005-2017 C. Kennington. Restructured Database & Forum skins ©2007-2017 J. Salva. Images, coding, and any other potentially liftable content may not be used without express written permission from their respective creator(s). Thank you for visiting!
Powered by Fiction Portal 2.0
Modifications © Manta2g, DemonGoddess
Site Owner - Apollo