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Reviews for Gotta Kiss Em All

By : Killer-K9
  • From drblacklighT on December 27, 2019

    Whens the next chapter?!?!


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  • From ContraryCorvid on December 23, 2018

    So, I don't usually review stories, but I'll make an exception because I really like what you're doing here. 

    I really enjoy the small internal conflicts Avery wages against himself. They feel very organic, and in fact mirror my own experiences when I first started reading non-het porn. I also like how respectful the story has been so far. Oftentimes stories devolve into mindbreaking pwp but this hasn't. You even go the distance by pointing out that Pokemon are highly impressionable, even if the love is mutual.

    However, and this is purely my opinion and you might already be thinking the same thing, be careful Avery's reluctance doesn't overstay its welcome. I'm not saying he should be a sex machine all of a sudden, but he needs to progress forward from here. Don't make it like the Pokemon anime where Ash never grows up.

    That's all I wanted to say. Good luck with your writing, happy holidays, and I hope to read more in the future!


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  • From AFFModerator on December 16, 2018

    Please correct your disclaimer.

    Your disclaimer doesn't have one of the two parts we need to see. It must say that no money/profit is made. Saying that it’s just for fun or just for entertainment purposes is not enough.

    What happens if the disclaimer isn't fixed? We allow seven (7) days for the story to be corrected. After that, we hide it, and it will stay hidden until it's corrected or until it's been thirty (30) days since we hid it.  At that point, we do delete the story. If we do hide your story, you can always access it through your Control Panel in your archive profile even while it's hidden. If we do hide your story, and you've fixed it, you can contact the ToS team with the name of your story, your username and the fandom where the story is located to have your story made visible again. You can contact us by email at TOS_team@adult-fanfiction.org. Just one thing: Re-uploads of hidden stories are deleted immediately with no additional warning given.

    Here's a link to the Terms of Service:

    http://www.adult-fanfiction.org/tos.php</p>

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    You can remove this review once your disclaimer is corrected.

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