Reviews for Tomb Raider: Natla’s Revenge.By : CrossroadsMk2 |
Excellent story. Would have loved to seen an ending where she was kept at Winston's slave. Maybe taken back to the gloryhole or used as a public toilet
I would like to see an ending where Sybil takes Croft manor as all of your endings of the story have Lara retain her role as countess but I would like to see one where she and Mary win and enslave Lara taking everything she has as each ending seems to have Lara having a good ending sort of but I would like to see a truly bad ending for Lara one where she is enslaved by Sybil and Mary as they use her to do there own dirty work treating her horribly as there main whore and slave girl as Sam also comes into this as she has long wanted to punish Lara for almost getting her possessed by Himiko years back as it was only thanks to Mary and Sybil that she got out of that mental asylum. I think that Lara should real Sybil's wrath as she and Mary take Croft manor tearing it apart as Sybil aims to remove everything that stands for Croft burning her family photos and destroying her symbol of the manor as Sybil puts her own symbol on Marlow manor which is two eagles with a sword with a large M underneath it standing for Marlow as Lara fears what her enemies will do to her prized possessions as she begs them to spare her manor and her symbol only to get kicked in the face by her mistress who show her no mercy as Sybil smiles wickedly as the 12th countess of Abingdon plans to destroy the Croft name once and for all. I think that Mary should smile wickedly knowing that soon Lara will be no more as she has hated the young woman since the first moment she saw her in school as she also despises the fact that Sam befriended the arrogant girl who thought she could buy everything not having to learn anything as she chuckles evilly as Sybil kicks Lara while she's down showing her no mercy just like the friend she is as she dials Sam aiming to ask her and Mio to help her and Sybil redecorate Croft manor knowing that the young woman hates Lara as much as she does after the whole Himiko adventure as she helped Sam get out of the mental asylum after she nearly killed herself to stop Himiko for good. I think that Sam should smile as she see's the work men beginning to turn Lara's former house into Marlow Manor as she may still like Lara as a friend but after the events on Yamatai she grew to despise her former friend who had everything handed to her on a silver platter never having to work for anything in her live and mostly learned archeology from her father along with the many languages that she can speak but it will incense Sam how little she cares and how arrogant she is to other people as Mary and Sybil two of Lara's rivals saved her form the mental institution along with her father as she never forgave Lara for what she did or didn't do on Yamatai and has sort revenge ever since.
Chap9 ending was very sexy. Great stuff
Chapter 9 removed Lara Croft. that I enjoy, this way isn't what interests me anymore, so I'll wait for new story with Professor Croft.
I enjoyed the new chap9 for the most part. Glad to see Lara with Sarah. Looking forward to more horse-play.
Nice work with modification of chapter 8. Horse part was very good.
I was wondering how could be a fun story prequel where Lara sexually irritates her staff. Just a chapter where Lara is dominant. Before the Natla arrival.
I added a second chapter to the adult-fan comics with classic Lara.
https://e-hentai.org/g/1561788/1c24c4d2d5/
Chap 10, regarding the change. I would suggest you rename the revised chap 9 in some way to indicate change. Glad you are going with my end path. I'm hoping for some beasts and Sarah doing some intense fisting with Lara to seal her dominance.
Next story idea sounds cool. Maybe that student domming her can be a girl? Looking forward to more chaps and stories, thanks
Keep chapter 8, I loved what you have so far
Chap9, mostly not my thing but certainly well written. I prefer this fate out of the options given. Happy about Sarah. My hope is that Lara ends up a happy, submissive wife to Sarah.
As far as animals, horses are always good. If we need variety then wolves (Lara kinda owes them) or dogs. For something really unusual maybe a dolphin. They love to screw around with humans.
A question. I have not played most of the reboot games so I dont know if Natla is in them. Is this a mundane version of Natla or is she an immortal being from Atlantis with super-science like in the old games? If the later, maybe she could genetically engineer some animals (Lion) or monsters to have sex with Lara and perhaps impregnate her.
Looking forward to more chaps soon!
Never reviewed before but this is one of my all time favorites <3 Always a fan of Lara related stories with darker endings and this is just too perfect
Since this is a Hellfire Club, would it be too much to have a cosplay day where they do elements of the X-Men version? Complete with Lara Croft as Jean Grey in the comics version, and having to dye her hair red for a while? That could also serve to strip-mine away part of her identity, too.
I do like where this is going, and I agree with the suggestions in the other review about the sex with students factor.
Another thing that might work, given that Lera is married to a woman now, is having her participate in a lesbian gangbang of people punishing her for 'cheating' on her wife, which is of course made extra ironic by every single one of the women doing this being married themselves. :P And if Lara dares to point out that hypocrisy, she gets an extra anal train each time she does. All of this in turn is geared at teaching her to obey orders, no matter how hypocritical.
Thank you for the new chapter, it was fun. Finally something after such a long time.
About my idea with students.
Lara could teach sex in a classroom in an office sexy suit. I liked your previous story of splitting sex lessons for making love with a princess and hard sex with a slut.
I think it would be fun if students were obsessed with Lara Croft, she would be their masturbation fantasy, and now their fantasy would come true.
I would like Lara to dominate over the students. I think if Lara tells one of the students it is time try anal sex, he would cum before he did it. Lara would have enjoyed teaching the students and would not feel like a slave.
I think it could be an interesting test with glory-hole. The student would have the task of knowing which hole Lary Croft fucks. The student behind the wall should have the task of identifying which hole of Lara Croft is using. The other students in their desks would have to watch everything quietly. Also, Lara could test students for how long they would endure handjob, assjob, breastjob, oral, anal, pussy sex, DP, DAP and more. For example, if a student endure five minutes of intensive handjob (of course Lara's hottest photos would be projected on the data projector), he can choose from clothes that Lara immediately wears and what sexual practices he will use to reach orgasm with her. It could be two parts. First sex teaching and second testing their sexual performance a few days later.
Really enjoyed chap 8, the horse sex was great. Medial rings!
Not so happy with Sarah getting dommed and don't really want to see Lara as a sex worker but hopefully whatever happens will be well written. Lara should spend more time with animals. I also want to read Sarah really owning her and making her an obedient wife.
Thank you for the gloryhole chapter but I'm a little disappointed. I was expecting more than just oral sex. However, the tattoo with the Croft emblem and lettering is great, the red dress is also very attractive. I liked part of the story where Lara exchanged sexual service for confidentiality in a tattoo parlor. I liked most the chapter 6. From the proposal for future chapters story is not too much interesting or attractive (for me). I wish some story twist. And also the chapter where Lara is at the university, conceals her sexual sins, sexually tease young students with her hot outfits and more. I don't feel her very attractive when she is just degraded. But it is just my opinion.
I vote for option 2 with Sybil accompanying Lara to record her "adventures" and publish them on members only website. This way Lara can earn some money and reimburse Natla for this lovely trip. After all Natla supposed to be Lara enemy, she can't be founding all her entertainment.
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