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Reviews for Obsession and Love

By : Ocean
  • From MisstressNicole on May 01, 2007
    Did no one tell you to finish this? I want you to update, finish. Write hot sex scene, maybe some fanart. I don't care but I need something more, something extra.

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  • From ANON - Anon on January 02, 2007
    HOW MANY MORE OF MY REVIEWS DO U NEED!? UR A HORRIBLE TEASE! :;sniff:: I hate u! Ok, no i dont. Update pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease please please
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  • From ANON - BakuraxMalikFan on December 15, 2005
    YES! UPDATE PLEASE. GREAT FIC

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  • From ANON - Amarissa on November 16, 2005
    Please continue! The story is great so far!
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  • From ANON - Mina on November 06, 2005
    OMG YES! Please continue! I just rented this game lastnight and loved it! Homonculus and Eike are so hot!....I'm not sure if their are a lot of ppl who know of it so i hope u will continue even if u dont get a lot of reviews.
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  • From on November 02, 2005
    PLEASE CONTINUE!!!! XDDDD
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  • From on October 09, 2005
    Oh please!!! You need to... UPDATE OMG!!! !PLEASE!!! ^___^ I loved it. It made me go squee giggle giggle!
    Okay?! UPDATE!!!
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  • From ANON - Homunculus2501 on August 22, 2005
    Ok, as much as this fic amuses me I feel I must make some constructive critizism, from one author to annother. Ok, fisrst, I hate to say it, but pic one POV and stick with it. I dont mind going back and forth, but every paragraph is a little much. Also, I love yaoi and such and LOVE this pairring, considering my love of hermys, but it seems as though there was nothing but to go right to the sex with hardly an explanation. I like PWPs as much as the next person, but means no plot, not no sign of a back story. Also, I love this concept of Eike enslaving Homuculus, but I highly dought hes got the grapes so to speak. Eike is so pussywhipped. Anyways, I DO like this fic, but I just had to get that said. Best of luck!
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  • From ANON - jamezdean on July 03, 2005
    i like it... there should be more of it.. this is good so far
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  • From ANON - Kalia on April 26, 2005
    It would be nice if you continue;obsession of Eike and the anger of the Djinn goes over...And something sensual becames to build.Like the idea?Please keep writing...
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  • From ANON - Til\' death do i part on April 07, 2005
    nenene pls do reply i'm dying to knoe what happens next. I've been waiting 4 almost two years. So pls do I'm anxious sorry about forcing u. bye
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  • From ANON - Meow_the_stalker on October 14, 2004
    u must go on!!! very good u must complete....me like very much... Bye bye
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  • From ANON - Efreet of the Red Stone on July 31, 2004
    I think this story has alot of potential, it is just a little hasty is all. I like where this is going, but to me it simply deems rated 'R'. I originally read this under fanfiction.net (my name: makai goddess ookami) and think you *could* post the whole thing under 'R'. 'course you should put a rape warning on it. =P I personally think you should do a sequel, as it would be awsome, and if you need a beta-reader I'm open =P (no offense if you already have one.)

    Bring on the Homunculus Eike slash! there is to little of it! *waves a banner*

    Dara, Efreet of the Red Stone
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  • From ANON - TalaXRei on July 05, 2004
    Good fanfiction there, since I am playing the game at the moment. I was realy suprised to see this section for S.O.M on here, to be honest. I don't understand who the story is told by though. CAN YOU PLEASE TELL ME IN A REVIEW TO ONE OF MY FICS SOMETIME, CAUSE MY E-MAIL ISN'T WORKING AT THE MOMENT.

    Good nevertheless... Keep it up, and BE MORE CLEARER ON WHOS ING ING THE STORY! ^_^

    Love Rei

    XXX
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  • From ANON - pikinanou on April 05, 2004
    ooooooohhhh sooo hentai, soooo goood yesssss

    it's strange to see homunculus in the submisive positionmoremore expected eike but it's good to make it different.^_^
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