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  • From ANON - VelvetWhipser on April 05, 2004
    You muct continue. If only for my sake. ^^;
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  • From ANON - cideon on March 10, 2004
    Yay, a SoD fic! I really hope you'll finish it, giving us more of an idea of what happened to make Eike lose his emotions besides lust. Poor Hom... bet that'll keep him exceptionally angry. But perhaps he's the only one who'll be able to help Eike lose that "evil-ness"? Hoping to see more soon!
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  • From ANON - Angelus Errare on January 28, 2004
    oh pls do continue i'm too excited to wait i want 2 see the next chapter.Poor Homunculus. that's gotta hurt.

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  • From ANON - Charcoquamquamarine on January 22, 2004
    Egads, this is great!! This is the first story I've seen for that game, and its about time someone wrote one. ^___^ Plz continue. Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz xxx
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  • From ANON - Krimzon on January 16, 2004
    Yeah. You must continue. If you're waiting for more reveiws, don't expect many. Shadow of Destiny is too small a genre as it is, and I have only discovered the awsomness of it recently. Great fic though. A few spelling mistakes, but what is a fanfic without a little error?
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  • From Foley on January 10, 2004
    I'm not a very good writer... so, anyone "rushing" a fanfic is okay. I do it too. It's kinda like, off the top of my head. A rough draft, if you will. I think Eike is cool, and Homunculus just gives me the heeby-jeebees, but I like him too. They're both cute. ^__^ I'm glad to see someone else writing about Eike and Homunculus. ^^ Yay!!!!! Write more on them, I demand it. >3
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  • From ANON - BTK_Black on December 03, 2003
    Hi! That's a really cool fic.Well it's not his will to be so gourgeous on so beautiful.hehehehe.I can't wait for the next chapter come on the excitement is killing me.pls continue i'm dying because of the suspence plsplsplsplsplsplspls continue- Sorry for acting like a kid alright Peace Out. And may u live longer.

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  • From ANON - s.o.m.fan on September 11, 2003
    wow,different.could you please continue?
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  • From ANON - Shido on June 26, 2003
    As one authoress to another, I believe this fic could have a lot of potential. I'm sorry if I sound rude, but when reading through this chapter, it feels very rushed. The idea you present is interesting, but I think the final product degrades that.
    I think that in that state, you do not portray Eike's motivation, his reasoning for summoning Homunculus, very well. It appears sketchy, and a bit contradictory in places.
    I don't think that the higher rated fiction suits this pairing, although if the storyline calls for it, and it is written well, exceptions can be made. I am not against higher-rated fiction by any means; I do read a good amount of NC-17 fiction, although I do not write it.

    Of course, you do not have to take my advice, and I will not enforce it upon you. But should you consider rewriting this part; I can give you the URL of a forum where I know of a few SoD fans who would be willing to assist you in beta-reg.
    g.

    ~ Shido
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  • From ANON - Lisette on June 26, 2003
    It's so wonderful to see that someone besides me likes Shadow of Destiny! Homunculus is so cute! But I must wonder about the physical aspect of their relationship. Isn't Homunculus an it? Just a thought... I'd love it if you wrote more! I've never been able to find Eike/Homunculus fanfiction before! *squeals with delight*
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