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  • From ANON - Jacque on November 17, 2006
    This is a very cute story! I like it! are there going to be anymore chapters or was that it?
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  • From ANON - foxegirl90 on June 23, 2005
    MORE!!!
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  • From ANON - SHADOW. on June 14, 2005
    LOVED IT TOTALY LOVED IT...TOTALY LOVE YOUR WORK, AND I TRULY HOPE THAT YOU WILL ADD MORE CHAPTERS TO THIS FIC SOON....OTHER THAN THAT KEEP UP THE WORK.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 14, 2005
    jdfjfj
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  • From ANON - ToonMistress on February 07, 2005
    I like it! I want more Zora fun with Link and Ruto's son. He's just so cute for a Hylian/Zora Hybrid!
    Harpie Master: Ummmm......
    What? You know I love Zelda stuff!
    HM: And you bugged me about liking Aeris, Mai, and Amelia? Ruto's a fish!
    It's because she and I are a bit alike. Plus it's not a commonly used pairing so I find it cute! Plus their son has teal hair and turquoise lips! You don't see that everyday!
    HM: *sighs*
    I want more!
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  • From ANON - buriedmyselfalive on May 10, 2004
    Frankly, i fucking love it. See, when people are just gonna write one chapter, they always put some shit before it, when all you want is sex. and you get down to business. you wording is excellent, and vocabulary is better than most ive read. i personally write stories with lots and lots of chapters, so i like to read stuff like that when i need insperation.
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  • From ANON - Demon from Beyond on March 11, 2004
    I personnaly enjoyed this story a great deal. I think you should continue it.
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  • From on January 03, 2004
    woot! that was awesome. yayayayayay.
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  • From ANON - Tourach on December 29, 2003
    Nicely done.
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  • From ANON - Nicky McCloud on November 21, 2003
    Wow. I'm not usually one for Zelda smut, but this was great! I hope you add more. You show a lot of promise as an author. :) By the way... From your description of Link's son, I assume that Ruto would be the mother?
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  • From ANON - Sammanthah on October 20, 2003
    I loved this fic. It caught my attention immediately, and was deffenately an excellent read. You absolutely HAVE to continue this one. I would love to see what Link and Gannondorf's reactions would betheythey found out... And if Ruto would have the same reaction, or see past the titles each family member has....

    I am counting on you adding to this one.
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  • From ANON - Kassidy-chan on October 11, 2003
    oh my god....*lil squeal* it's soooo good! but it's soooo sad at the end of the chapter...;.; I hope you write more, this is truely a lovely piece.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 04, 2003
    that whas great pleas continue
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  • From Streti on October 02, 2003
    You certainly do write well. A nice, original setting and an intriguing story. I'm never too fond of non-consensual scenes, but the situation developed rather surprisingly into a consensual one. If you do revise the story, I would hope that you'd downplay the non-consensual element. Trevan's change from an uncaring assaulter into a joking, tender and uncertain first-timer is too striking. I do hope you write more, as this is much better than an average lemon, and the setting is intriguing enough with a solid foundation to warrant further exploration.

    Yoritiriting is good, but there were some things that struck out:
    "Why is Ganondorf not aloud in here freely" - erroneous spell checker correction of allowed?

    "Killing me would me more trouble than it's worth, hmmmm?" - typo of be into me?

    "It will only incense my eagle parent, and I am
    well aware of how vital my praenomen hidden from our enemies." - a rather strange sentence. Words missing?

    Thanks for writing this, I hope you continue!
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on September 25, 2003
    I like it. Write more. =)
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