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Reviews for Divine Love

By : Kyoto
  • From ANON - torquemada_coteaz on September 13, 2006
    zervus,
    First if you are NOT crossing SC with Warhammer 40k then ignore it. if you are well there is something i have to set straight.
    THE GREY KNIGHTS DON'T HAVE ANY INQUISITORS!!!
    The Inquisitors belong to the Inquisition and this organisation is divided in threee Ordos(Maleus, Hereticus and Xeno). The Grey Knights are only the Ordo Militaris for the Ordo Maleus.
    So Tyr is an Inquisitor of the Orda Maleus NOT of the Grey Knights. together they are called the demonhunters
    I am a demonhunter-player so it just pisses me off if someone is twisting the background.
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  • From ANON - Bruce on June 19, 2006
    hey, how come the rest of the fanfic isn't there anymore? please repost or send the full copy to me, its a good one! thanks.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 26, 2005
    I was kind of sad, because I thought Mi-Na Taki and Xianghua were going to get some. v.v I must agree with Seung Mina. xD
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  • From on November 27, 2005
    WOW! that was HOTT!
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  • From ANON - BRP on August 08, 2005
    Oh yeah.
    When a man touches a woman's clit with his hands or penis, it starts to jolt her into arrousal, often, even makes her cum many a time. Next, a man must slide his sword into the woman's sheathe, and together, they climax. May i suggest you read an anatomy book as well as love-making books? The Kama Sutra is a classic. Also, find a nice dating partner, to learn the art of love with. K? Still, I like your tale. Please, do continue.
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  • From ANON - BRP on August 08, 2005
    =LOL=
    i liked this new hero, even if he was a scank. I was disappointed that he had yet to seduce Ivy. :( U mean. Please continue, or, as one of the characters threatened, i shall shove a sword up where the sun dont shine, mwahahaha. :P
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  • From ANON - Jennifer on July 28, 2005
    I have to agree last chapter is funny.
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  • From ANON - Inazuma on July 04, 2005
    I don't see why everybody's getting so pissed off about this fanfic. Get your heads out of your asses. Fanfiction allows you to portray characters any way you fucking like, as long as you don't claim them. Heh. Kyoto, keep on writing my friend.
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  • From Elklodge on June 08, 2005
    Don't listen to these other guys about quitting. Sure this fic sucked, but you shouldn't quit just because of that everyone has a bad story and I'm sure if you keep working at it you'll get better. Now to cut the Disney crap and tell you straight up, you need to improve...fast!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 06, 2005
    HEAD FANFIC HONCHO: So girls, what do you think of Kyoto's fanfic?

    CASSANDRA: It sucked balls. If some guy was to get easy with me....I'll.........

    SOPHITIA: Sister, CHILL! Anyways, I am glad I'm not in this fanfic.

    SEUNG MINA: Same here. If someone wrote something so bad about me, I'll spear them through the ass.

    TAKI: Well, looks like I have another demon to capture, and that demon is a BAD FANFIC WRITER!

    IVY: The next time I see this guy, I will cut off all his parts with my beloved Valentine.

    TALIM: How dare they wrote a lemon about me getting it on with a 30 year old. I'm only 15, put me with someone around my age range.

    XIANGHUA: Oh, I liked the fanfic!

    *everyone glances at Xianghua*

    XIANGHUA: *winks* Just kidding! His fanfic sucks!
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  • From ANON - Finality on April 17, 2005
    That was a pretty bad story. ^^; I'm sorry, but there was no grammar, and the lemon was kind of horrible. Good luck on your next one.

    ~
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  • From ANON - Jennifer on January 21, 2005
    Ivr or whatever his name is, must be a pimp. If he was in SC II, he'll probably get his ass kicked for flirting with all the girls.
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  • From ANON - JHeman on December 18, 2004
    Terrible; no hope of improvement.
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  • From on September 08, 2004
    Heh heh heh! This story sure is amusing, whether or not it means to be. You've gotta admit, dude, the ladies blush far too often, and your similies for comparing erotic moments to scratching eyeballs is... well, incredibly bizzare.

    If it's okay, I'd like to use this story for my MST3K-like stories that I'm doing. If there are any problems, just review it when it is up. Have a nice day!
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  • From ANON - Nil on September 04, 2004
    OMG ROFLMAO
    "You're pretty." *blush*
    "They're pretty." *blush*
    Priceless, priceless stuff. I've never seen so many "fucking her out of her mind"s in one place in my entire life. XD
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