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By : ColdSilence
  • From ANON - angelstarfire on December 30, 2005
    ...I didn't see that last chapter. >_> And now I feel incredably sorry for Riku... Dyne doesn't "love" Sora the way Riku does... arg. I'm fighting the urge to cry. It's early in the morning, blast it... anyhow. *points up* all that stuff still applies... I'm glad that Dyne got what he wanted... but now I just want things to turn out well for Riku. *sad* I look forward to your next chapter...
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  • From ANON - angelstarfire on December 30, 2005
    Oh my goodness.. I've been reading this fic from about 3:00am... it's now 6:30am. Granted, I'm a little tired, but this is the most original fic I've ever read... O_o; and considering how much I read in a day/week/month/year, that's saying a lot...

    You've done a beautiful job creating a character for BHK, and I know this is a REALLY good fic because half of the time I'm rooting for Sora and Riku, and the other half I'm rooting for Sora and Dyne... I am truely torn as to who I want to root for... I'm seriously considering begging you for a 3-way to solve the delimma... lol.

    Your writing is excellent... I think I only found one spelling error in all your chapters (and it isn't really an error... just a Brittish vs. American spelling thing). I'm very impressed, as most of the time I find a crapload of errors in stories... but yours is refreshing in both the fact that I don't have the urge to correct every other word, but I find myself wondering what is coming next.

    Dyne's background...it's just so well plotted out, and you explain everything very well. I really look forward to your next chapter... this fic is absolutly wonderful! :)
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  • From ANON - Hikaru on December 20, 2005
    Wow. Just...wow. Let me start off by saying that I stumbled upon this story by complete accident, and I am extremely glad that I did. I will admit that I normally stick to a few certain fandoms whenever I read fanfiction, and Kingdom Hearts is not one of them. What you have done here is created an entire universe around your storyline, and you've done it thoroughly and completely. I cannot really say just how impressed I am. I'm not a fan of reviews that spew nothing but mindless praise, but this time I feel that I just can't help myself. I normally like to make my reviews constructive, so that they help the author...but the truth is that I feel that by reading this, I've been the one that's received help. THis story has helped to widen the expanses of what I thought fanfiction could be. I found absolutely no flaws in your story, the grammar is superb, your diction is an absolute delight to the imagination, and you have one of the most highly-developed vocabularies I've seen in fanfiction. I would go so far as to say that this is, without a doubt, the best written piece of fanficiton I've found to date. I don't claim to be a fanfic guru who's read thousands upon thousands, but I have been reading for many years now. Never before have I taken such a liking to an original character, or felt so deeply immersed in a story. I actually stayed up until 4 in the morning last night reading this, when I should've been studying for my semester exams. The way you characterized Dyne, and portrayed his emotions and feelings really let me connect with the character, and associate with his feelings, and that is a talent more rare than diamonds when it comes to writing. When it came down to the smexing, I was actually excited for the couple, and am slightly embarassed to admit that I've been rooting Dyne on ever since I caught on to the feelings he seemed to have for Sora. I looked forward to him getting the object of his desires, and was delighted when it came true. To sum it all up, I wanna thank you for sharing this piece. It's been an extremely enjoyable read, and it has hooked me like no other has yet to do. You've taken a world dimly illuminated in a video game and turned it into a working universe that fascinates the reader. I wish the best of luck to you in your writing endeavors, a fanboy-ish poke to update soon, and a congratulations for truly winning over a reader. I was tempted to say "They just don't write 'em like this anymore," but to be perfectly honest, I'm not sure they ever have in the first place.
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  • From ANON - Dancing on December 16, 2005
    Hi! I really like this fic, it's awesome! Are you ever going to update it? I hope so!
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  • From ANON - Katt on November 04, 2005
    Very good. I like the developement and twists of the plot....please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - dusk on October 31, 2005
    Happy, HAPPY day! Thank you so much for continuing with this story! It was such a nice suprise to find this story updated after not checking this site for months. And I adored this chapter, it was so HOT! *fans self* At first, I was really nervous for Sora and didn't think it would be the right time for Dyne and Sora to go all the way but by the end of the chapter I was convinced that it was the right time. Their love and affection really shines through and I love how from chapter one you let their sexual tension build up slowly. That's how stories are supposed to be! However, I am feeling dreadfully nervous for Riku. *cries* I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - :) on October 14, 2005
    I have been reading this fic over and over again. It is just so good. When I first read the summary I was a bit iffy on reading this but now I'm really glad I did.

    When I read this, I picture Sora looking as he does in Kingdom Hearst II. When you described how he looked as from Riku's POV on Cloud's yacht...you got it right on the mark in my opinion.

    I can't help but want to see more action with Axel though....Riku too... What makes me really happy as well is how you portray Kairi. You don't bash her or anything like that, in fact, you make her really likeable.

    Your plot building is quite nice, I must say. The story is starting to pick up in speed without losing the reader's interest at all.

    I hope this review makes up for all the other chapters I haven't reviewed. ^^;;

    You left the fic off at a really interesting point. My curiosity is at its peak. I eagerly await the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Bealmira on October 14, 2005
    Oooh, poor Riku!! And man, dirty Sora for keeping to pictures on his _phone_. Geeze... Well, I can't wait to see out this works out! Update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Kat on September 03, 2005
    i am loving this fic, its amazing. im looking forword to the next update, i feel bad for Riku. i cant whait to find out what happens next. keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Tsuki S. on September 03, 2005
    update soon please? It's a very well written and a VERY good story ^____^
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  • From ANON - Katie on September 02, 2005
    O.o! Poor Reno! *huggles him to death*
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  • From ANON - The Yaoi Hunters on August 31, 2005
    ooh god damn it that was soo good. Is Riku going to do something about this is he going to pout is he going to cry is he going to get revenge. Is Sora going to suddenly regreat it and then get angry at Dyne who then may get upset ya de ya de ya...!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH*blinks and blushes* woops I just shouted in school now look what you made me do. Please contiune I really truely want to know what happens next. POOR RIKU*takes Riku into my arms and hugs him to the point where his back brakes* woops tee hee.
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  • From ANON - who me? on August 29, 2005
    *wails* i thought you were gone! i LOVE this story and here i was thinking you had abandoned it! i had the funeral all planned out and everything. please tell me that your update will come sooner than this one did ^_^;
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  • From ANON - dusk on April 01, 2005
    I am in love with fic! I reviewed on your website and couldn't help but put a little something here too! The plot is so unique and the humor so endearing. I am completely smitten with it! The scene with Dyne and his first Estrus! OMG, so hot! *dies* Oh! And the scene with Riku and Sora! *dies again* I can't get enough of it, please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Quichi on March 23, 2005
    OMFG!!! This has to be the awesomest thing I've read in YEARS! You have NO IDEA how happy you've made me!!! Please don't ever give up!!! *HEART EYES*
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