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Reviews for Chrono Trigger - To Far Away Times

By : VGSS
  • From ANON - ArchangelM127 on November 20, 2006
    Excellent work. Creative, erotic, funny... I could go on. Short version: great story! It's even canon. ^^ However, I must urge you to use a proofreader--a human, not just spellcheck--when you write from now on. The story had more silly little spelling and grammar errors than I could count. Some of them may have been transposition errors or something; converting from Word to .txt can do that, for example. Many others were obviously author error. Go back and look it over once or twice, then get a friend who has good grammar to look it over for you. With this simple step, you'd take great writing and make it nearly perfect. :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 28, 2005
    This is reaally excelltn, keep goingman
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  • From ANON - Sapphire Weapon. on June 20, 2005
    Wow... Finally the 3rd part. I read the other 2 parts YEARS ago. Good to read the 3rd!
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  • From VGSS on June 18, 2005
    I can't beleive I neglected to post the final part for so long. I check my reviews every few months, but for some reason never realized the CT part cut off like that. Rest assured, it's up now. Hope whoever made those comments is still around...
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  • From ANON - Wolfboy1988 on September 11, 2004
    wheres the rest of it?
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  • From ANON - Somebody on March 19, 2004
    Beutiful story!! You gatta make another that continues off of this.. I would pay to read it.
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  • From ANON - Nick on May 31, 2003
    you hit the filesize limit again. you really should do it in seperate chapters and upload it all in one place; it'd be a lot easier, which would be a good thing, since you've got a really, really good story here.
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  • From ANON - lordanur on April 10, 2003
    WOW i love it giver me more very soon thank you
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  • From ANON - vgss on April 09, 2003
    Hmm... I just noticed this, but I didn't realize the story was incomplete!

    It appears AFF has a limit on story size. Anyway, please read the rest I've
    just uploaded.

    As for the comment about Crono not being the one to take Marle's
    virginity... I wanted to do something different :) This was a story about
    Crono and Lucca. And besides, aren't there enough C+M first time lemons
    out there? :)
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  • From ANON - lordanur on April 08, 2003
    so far so good i like it so far i personaly think crono should have poped her not the guards but oh well i cant wait for more
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  • From ANON - The Bovinator on March 12, 2003
    Absolutely Wonderful! You've done it again!
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