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Reviews for Slaughter

By : Light7
  • From Poisongirl on May 29, 2008
    Way to rip off Poppy Z. Brite.....
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  • From ShowndraRidge on October 02, 2007
    Chapter two needs to be reloaded (it's rather cut off) .... now how to tell you in a way you'll actually find out about...
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  • From ANON - Erret on October 22, 2005
    pale is the word you mean. not pail. that was chewing on me the entire fic.. :( sorry.

    anyway.. excelent fic really. Very...stimulating. heh.
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  • From ANON - SHADOW. on June 15, 2005
    TOTALY LOVED THEIS FIC, AND I TRULY HOPE THAT YOU ADD MORE CHAPTERS TO IT SOON....OOH AND I TOTALY LOVE YOUR WRITING STYLE TOO, AND I HOPE YOU KEEP IT UP....TOTALY LOOKING TO THIS FIC BEING UPDATED SOON.
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  • From KagetsuAsame on March 02, 2005
    Chapter 2 is missing a large chunck but I can't wait to find out what happens. Very interesting so far, I look forward to readin the rest.
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  • From ANON - Sister Chelsea on March 01, 2005
    Don't let this story die! Feed it blood – lots of fresh, hot blood. Very promising opening ... keep going. I know you can do it!
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  • From ANON - raziel_vampire on December 23, 2004
    This is AMAZING, GREAT, SWEET and I'd really love to read next chapters of it!!! ;] WELL DONE!!!
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  • From Zephon on November 05, 2004
    Hi!! I'm so sorry that my review is so late, but I submitted one and it didn't seem to come Online. Basically it's the same as all my other reviews. Your a Goddess and I need your Updates. I hope that everything went wwithwith the moving and that your Onkel will let you use the net... Keep it up... please... ^.^
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  • From ANON - Homuculus on October 15, 2004
    Holy monkies, this fic is cute! I absolutly love it. Please write more, please. Such a cute fic. I really want to see what happens XD
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  • From gypsyqueen on October 10, 2004
    *purrs and meows* Please continue, darling! I love it so very much!
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  • From Zephon on September 24, 2004
    Yay! Keep writing, that makes me happy! I went to your homepage (and added it to favorties right away ^.^) and read slaughter, then I came here and read it again. So now I'm going to review because I think that I've read the story enough times to say a few things about it. First of all: Good job. I really liked it that you went away from the angst (although your angst IS DELICIOUS) and decided to write something more... happy? Anyway, your Kain was great and the way you described his awakening prior to Raziel's was stunning. I could actually feel what you meant with that, and how scared and angry Kain must have been. The short memory sequence was wonderful, it gave us a little bit more insight in how your Kain is at the moment, so we realize when he starts to change. Your description of Raziel was very contradicting, on one side it's this cute and sweet cuddly flegling, and on the other he doesn't have seeing eyes in the beginning which is a bit disturbing, but absolutley wonderful for the atmosphere of the story.
    Other than that, I just wanted to say something to 'Smooth'. I read on your homepage that it's the most read story and I just wanted to say why I think that is (I know! I gotta give my *hit to everything... forgive me...) To begin with, the plot is very nice and easy to follow. The constant switch between Romantic and Angst would make any true fangirl sob along and Kain is absolutley... perfect? But what really makes it such an epic story, is the your writing style. The switching between present and past, the transition between the memory and the nightmare and the way your took the text and scenes so effortlessly from Blood Omen 2 and managed them into your story, without hurting the actual game at all. I love to read and write myself, and I am very impressed with everything you have done so far. Please keep writing and be sure that if you do, you'll always have a fan in me ^.^
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  • From ANON - kik on September 23, 2004
    Lovet it
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