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Reviews for Urinals

By : kevman
  • From ANON - Popcorn Oracle on October 10, 2005
    ... >_>. What the hell was that? That was a joke... right?
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  • From ANON - Mr.D on August 02, 2005
    Good story but it was very short and also i would very much apreciate an update.
    sincerly,
    Mr.D
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  • From ANON - dirty on June 14, 2005
    hahaha gotta love bathroom sex...maybe a golden shower next time ?
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  • From ANON - Dominique on April 18, 0000
    u totally rock! everytime i see u updated a story, i immediately rush to read it with excitement, and not ONCE have u let me down! its always amazing! this shows how truly of a excellent writer u r! i hope u keep the good work up! actually, i KNOW u will!! luv this story! and please update present too! thank u!
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  • From ANON - Anne on April 18, 0000
    I've read your story before I think. Did you publish it at some other site? (can't remember where I saw it)

    It is dark, but I like that you use the predjudice theme. As long as we don't have scenes like this every other chapter
    I can handle it.

    I just wanted to mention I like your general writing style. You manage to grab the imagination and pull people into the story.

    I thought you were going to have Hermione check the marauders map, and see if she saw any suspicious movements.
    She must be suspecting that Draco is the culprit. I was just wondering if Crabbe and Goyle would spill the beans
    Not by just blurting out the truth, but you did show they were somewhat horrified by what happened. And they are both too
    thick and stupid to hide their feelings.

    I would expect Pansy to feel extra ashamed of the fact that it was Hermione and Ginny who found her of all people.
    So if there is any "development" between Ron and Pansy, it would be after quite a bit of strife and trouble.

    I'm looking forward to seeing where you will take the story next.

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  • From ANON - TrebleX on October 15, 2004
    Well, I must say it's a good short story. Remember that you need to start a new line for each new speaker though, because I don't think you did. However, despite that I enjoyed the story a lot, probably one of your best ones I've read so far to be perfectly honest. Well, keep on writing and good luck with all your further work!
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  • From ANON - Unknown on October 14, 2004
    hmmm twisted romance goodness cant wait to see more of your work
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