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Reviews for Getaway Driver

By : Sabulana
  • From ANON - Nubiti on September 06, 2006
    CUTE! Ohmygawd that's sooo cute. You should definitely write more Torn/Jak *nods to emphasize* But watch your grammar a bit *winks* some words aren't correct. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - GoodMorningBEautiful2005 on February 09, 2006
    I LIKED YOUR STORY A LOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    ~GMB~
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  • From ANON - Kouga on February 14, 2005
    I loved it soo much. You are an awsome author!
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  • From Siarra on January 20, 2005
    Got to love the slashy Jak/Torn goodness...

    This was indeed a very fun idea and it turned out well so no reason to hate it. It was hot and exciting, although I think that it got a little too mushy in the end. Might be just me, though. I don't do mushy/fluffy/sweet...

    Keep writing and we'll keep reading. :)
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  • From ANON - Kimiko on December 29, 2004
    ^__^
    woot!
    torn got some!
    I like this pair alot you should write more!
    =^.^=
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  • From ANON - Scrawl42 on December 12, 2004
    Oh, God, I was WAITING for somebody to use this idea! just...the was he _said_ it, man--"You can be _my_ getaway driver _anytime_, Jak." it sounded *exactly* like cheesy fanfiction. I'm glad somebody made a reasonably good story out of it.
    I've been checking out Jak_yaoi, and I noticed you've posted there. This fic is a little sloppy, but I think you should put it up in the community and add to the sadly small repertoire of pr0n. If you polish it a little, and give Torn a little more of a "Fuck you, ottsel" attitude, than this fic would be really great.
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  • From ANON - jemisard on December 06, 2004
    You shouldn't hate it. I mean, I'm a dedicated Jak/Daxter fan and I still enjoyed this one, because it was hot and steamy but maintained enough of the original characterisation to be honest to the game.

    I like Daxter's pushy questions, making sure that Torn isn't going to hurt Jak. And Jak is very vulnerable in this, I do like that. I think even Jak needs to beb vulnerable sometimes.

    So, don't hate it. It's good. It's hot and smutty, which was at least some of the aim I assume, and it's a nice piece.
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  • From ANON - sole on November 30, 2004
    wow very nice job! hmmm can't wait to read moreur work of your work. could you make a sequal to this?
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  • From ANON - SpiritFighter on November 29, 2004
    ^_^ I love it! There are a few grammer mistakes, but no one's perfect. I love the idea lots! I'm so happy you decided to write another fic!
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