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Reviews for Losing Sometimes Means Winning In Love

By : KittieNova
  • From Bewinha on September 14, 2007
    I'm loving it so far and I think the person was Piers.
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  • From Riii on October 31, 2005
    Typo: 'treases' should be 'tresses'. The paragraphing could use a little editing; the first two after 'earlier that day' are split in the middle of a sentence.


    It really seems to be Piers. It might have added something if he'd showed more sign of how he felt for her before then, besides speaking softly, admitting it to Sheba and going a bit icy when he didn't want his feelings to show. If there were some part that showed (rather than mainly told) how he felt, not just the way he was trying to not show it, then the line "I... just may not always show it." might mean more - as it is, 'I just never show it in any way' might seem to fit better. Flashbacks to the ship or something might have added a bit of variety... It's a nice piece, but the pace is a little slow, or the chapters a little short, I'm not sure which. You don't give Mia much character, and while she may not play a large part, her match, Isaac, is rather better portrayed. Hope this is helpful.
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  • From ANON - Bio1590 on January 09, 2005
    Fuck update this man
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  • From ANON - d on December 20, 2004
    The guy is either piers or alex,right?! GREAT STORY!!!! 10 ON 10 YAY UPDATE
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  • From ANON - bladeknight on December 15, 2004
    it was pretty good, I always like IsaacXMia Fics and when Jenna gets jealous.
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  • From ANON - DragonCatAngelus on December 06, 2004
    I think it's Piers. Nice twist though, with Isaac and Mia together. Unexpected as well. I just think that, with as good of a fic as this, it's unrealistic for Isaac to have been dressed that quickly.
    Keep up the good work though! If you don't, demonic owls will eat you!
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