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Reviews for In To Trouble

By : Jemisard
  • From ANON - rabbit444 on July 30, 2006
    There should be and another chapter.
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  • From ANON - Lori on October 14, 2005
    Why am I only reading this now?! This is the first Jak/Daxter story I've ever read, but it won't be the last!
    How could I have missed the chemistry between them?
    Damn, I need a swim!
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  • From ANON - FeralFaux on October 02, 2005
    Hot story and I love your style! Not many stories for Human Daxter/Jak, but this one is hot. Nice job.
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  • From ANON - Lethe on April 20, 2005
    Sry! No name on last review. My bad!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 20, 2005
    So hot! So incredibly well described, I think that I need a swim after reading. I love the way you just had them go crazy the second they knew she was out of earshot. Although, I would have liked to see something more of repurcussions or dealing with it afterwards, but the mood of the entire piece might not really have allowed it.
    Good descriptive text with a nice sort of timing to the whole piece. The illicit pleasure of sneaking in to steal something, followed by - well, the 'illicit' cupboard incident. Lots of buildup in different ways.

    - and a cupboard! Ow! Crampy! Trust me, I knows what I speak of!
    So very good. Thanka you!
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  • From AyaDragonsheart on April 14, 2005
    *wimper* i keep wating and waiting but i must finally demand that you make a sequel! please? pretty please? with cherries on top?
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  • From ANON - jaygoose on April 11, 2005
    *cackles* Oh hell... I loved this one too. You're turning me into a Jak and Daxter perv. *grins*
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  • From ANON - Ryo on March 26, 2005
    Mmm... More? I wouldn't mind reading another chapter of this. Yummy.
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  • From ANON - Tendi-chann on March 06, 2005
    Ahh... the excitement of almost getting caught! Love the story!
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  • From ANON - ZombieDuke on January 10, 2005
    That was... one of the hottest Jak and Daxter stories I've ever read. GOD it was good! I'm gonna have the mental image of Daxter whimpering while Jak is rocking against him, trying to get himself off stuck in my head all night!
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  • From heartlessgrey on December 31, 2004
    ...I have four words for you.

    I.
    Fucking.
    Love.
    You.

    You have made my fantasy come true! Ever since I saw human Daxter and Jak in the first game,
    I knew they were doin' it, but nobody -nobody- ever wrote anything that I could find!
    You made my week.
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  • From ANON - Voiceless009 on December 07, 2004
    I really like your writing style, but this is the first fic of yours I've ever reviewed. It's really good - nice and cute! Keep it up! Please! LOL
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