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Reviews for Ai No Arashi

By : Jammy
  • From BloodDragonAlchemist on June 24, 2012
    Aww will you continue this!!!! PLEASE!!!!
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  • From ANON - Fairy1234 on February 04, 2006
    I... I hate you, I seriously do. Not only is this a Mary-Sue INFESTED fic but this is also terrible as well. I can't believe you would stoop so low as to pair up my favorite character Vin with one of your horrid Sues. Vin would NOT bone a 19 year old, he has more diginty then that. My eyes are offically scarred just because of your shitty story. Do me a flavor and please get rid of it or fix it.
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  • From ANON - Anonymouse on August 31, 2005
    Nice. *waits patiently for the next chapter*
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 04, 2005
    come on update....i want to see dax and tess.....:thinks about it:......yeah lol update
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 04, 2005
    how about no?
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 01, 2005
    Dude! you have to post the next chapter!

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  • From ANON - Scrawl42 on December 22, 2004
    Are you familiar with the term "Mary-Sue"?
    Because, yeah.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 14, 2004
    I must be honest when i say this, but this isn't very good. I'm not being mean, but these stories are out of character, and no one really cares about non-Jak characters that YOU made up to pair them with. The story also shifts so much that it makes no sense. Yatto just... runs away from Jak? that's it? I seriously hope this is your first hentai fic.
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