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Reviews for My First Time

By : SonicXTails4eva
  • From ANON - VII on December 18, 2006
    very hot...but i want to know what happens "tonight"!!!...

    VII
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  • From ANON - Some Girl on October 25, 2005
    YAAY!! A SonTails fic on this site! This was well written. Can you do another one except Tails is a girl? Pleeeease??
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  • From ANON - chi no hana on October 25, 2005
    *struggles to get out of steaight jacket* updaaaaaaaaaaaates!!! i wanna see tails getting *censored*!!!
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  • From ANON - elecktra on October 03, 2005
    I love it! I loved the pairing also!!
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  • From ANON - Mr.D on August 02, 2005
    I must say that you are a talented writer. Also I must say that i would be deep in gratitude if you would be so kind as to update your wonderful story.
    sincerly,
    Mr.D
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  • From stormyluck on July 18, 2005
    it was good i liked it

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  • From ANON - Shadow\'s Sex Toy on May 22, 2005
    That was an okay story, but there are a couple things to look out for, 1. you need to be more descriptive in the sex scene, it was kind of boring and short, no offense; another thing is that you wrote the word "penis" often, this is a problem because most people like seeing stronger words, such as cock or dick and also you used it too mant times, when you use the name of a noun, unless its a proper noun try to call it more than one thing; and lastly you should have more in the story, you know something storng and meaningful in the beggining as to grab the readers attention; Other than that it was a fun story ^_^
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  • From ANON - ILURVFlake on February 14, 2005
    It was really sweet. I liked it alot. Could've been better w/o the drug reference (ecstasy((sp?))) to it, but it was very nice. PEACE!

    -Jake
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  • From ANON - Harley Quinn hyenaholic on February 08, 2005
    Where's the description? The suspense? The anything? This first chapter seemed to be intended to get Sonic and Tails to have sex as quickly as possible with as little description as possible. There's almost no dialouge between characters. And I expect the drugs are going to be a plot point so I won't complain too much, but Tails barely hesitated before taking them.
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