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Reviews for Secret Love

By : Sabulana
  • From ANON - bladeebla on May 22, 2005
    Interesting...I really liked how you decided not to make the whole thing just turn into smut. It worked well. Keep on with this story. It's worth it to continue.
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  • From ANON - Storyteller101 on March 12, 2005
    hey great story but please don't end it there its really good and ending a story for good with a cluff hanger is fuck up
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  • From ANON - Scrawl42 on March 05, 2005
    I hate to say this because I've read and liked other things you've written, but...well, this wasn't your best. Towards the end the dialogue got quite awkward, and i got the feeling you were nervous about writing yuri for the first time. However, if you polish this up (because it kind of does read like you wrote it at 3 in the morning, yeah :P) it could be a pretty good piece of fiction.
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