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By : Kriiz
  • From LostWolfsCry on November 29, 2008
    Great story! I loved reading it!
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  • From Brightside on February 01, 2007
    Oh, my, is this story amazing!

    You write the 'disturbing scenes' very well, I think. There's always this kind of... odd, gripping feeling that makes me want to read even if I know I'm going to be grossed out.

    By the by... did you perhaps get the idea of the parasite baby from the Facehuggers in the Alien series? It's a wonderful idea, I think! Please, do continue! I'm gripped by this story, truly
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  • From ANON - darkie's_stalker on January 04, 2007
    absolutely amazeing, best fic i have read in a long time, certainly the best one about darkie that there is, and im only halfway through it (cant finish reading at the moment because im about to fall asleep on the keyboard...) but this is amazeing.
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  • From ANON - TGB on January 01, 2007
    The ending of your story brought a wave of pent up rage. I was so mad he went back to his own time at the end. More so than when I found out Sheik was, in fact, Zelda. It was a wonderfully written story, all in all. Dark Link was deffinitely my favorite character.
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  • From ANON - Dragon on December 18, 2006
    Oppsie. I was so into writing you a good review, I forgot to put a name to it. ^-^'' That one up above is me. lol
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 18, 2006
    "The harder my ego gets stroked, the more likely my brain is to ejaculate good ideas!" = XD You are, and forever will be, the AWESOME. I love it! XD

    You like my play-by-play? Cool, I feel so proud. PBP for this chapter is not as fun, seeing as there isn't really a battle to be shocked about over and over again (^-^''). Basically went like this: Dude, I can SO see Dark at a party like that. *begins to drool* ...Ack! They're going to seriously hurt each other! Where the hell is Navi at at a time like this?! ... OO Okay, they didn't hurt each other too bad. *snicker*... Link, don't go like that! Take Dark with YOUUUUUU! (followed closely by) *wail* I want to give you a hug too Dark! *sob*

    The end really wanted to make me cry. At least Uula can be there for Dark when he needs her/comfort. But I was quickly sobered by Anju; that was just ominous. Still, it makes me think that the little Demon-Baby is going to have something to do with Dark getting back to Link somehow. ;) The suspense, I love it! Totally can't wait for the next installment!


    I decided I really dislike college exams, even more then usual. Because I was studying, I wasn't able to read this the first day you posted! I grieve!... *wail*
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  • From ANON - wouldnt-u-like-2-no on December 15, 2006
    plz, PLZ say that means a suqual!
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  • From ANON - Nuitari Aquarius on December 08, 2006
    RAAAAAH !!!!!
    Pity ! We want another chapter, that's too cruel to leave us like that ! You should be shameful... !

    Of course, it means that you're JUST a great author, and your style has really improved ! Great ! And so... dramatic, beautiful, sad, bloody and... wonderful.
    Means you've to write the sequel... fastly.
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  • From ANON - Kiyo-chan on December 06, 2006
    OMG! I love this story soooo much! I love the Link/Dark pairing, you have a great plot going, and the detail is wonderful! It's just like reading a REAL book (it'd be great to see it as a graphic novel)! I love this, again, and please please PLEASE continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Blueeyes on November 29, 2006
    This is a great story!! What do you mean about not an yaoi anymore?? I can clearly see where it is between Link and Dark. Please don't stop that!!! I beg you not to. I think they are a great pair believe it or not. Most people don't think that but please carry on with the Link/Dark Link thing please. For me? *Puppy dog face times 10000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000*
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  • From ANON - Megan on November 24, 2006
    Hey-y! Who says gay sexin' isn't reason enough to make Sheik a seperate character? :3 Though, that's not really the reason why I'm reviewing.

    I'm reviewing 'cause I liked your story, and how you did Dark Link, and in hopes that you'll write more and all that fun stuff.

    So... Review +1
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  • From ANON - rvbyaoifan on November 21, 2006
    Holy crap that is the best story i've ever read you describe the story so well it sounds like a novel(a very graphic novel)i mean ive never seen a story this well written hope you continue ^_~ peace
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  • From ANON - Dragon on November 17, 2006
    Another chapter! *so happy!*

    You did wonderfully for a fight scene, honest you did. It was just as awesome as everything else. Good job! And honestly, you scared me there a few times. (Examples) Dark Link lost his arm! *gasp* Is he going to die?! ...Navi's wings are broke?! *shock* Will she still be able to fly?! ...Dark's bleeding out! HE'S GOING TO DIEEEEEEE!!!! *wail*.... ^-^'' (Followed closely by)...Yay! He's still alive! Sorta... WH00T!!

    And, truth be told, I never quite understood why so many people disliked Navi so much. Yes, I agree she got a little trying at times, like when she'd repeat the same thing over and over sometimes, but I didn't hate her for it. It was just how the game worked. So, I'm happy to hear that a few more people have given the sweet fairy a chance, if only by reading your version of her (which, by the way, is a very AWESOME version of her character). =)
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  • From ANON - Ithy on November 17, 2006
    An incredibly well-written and throughout 'realistic story'. The first one without gay sex I've finished reading here. xD; Yeah, that's the only thing Ihave to say on this, being a rabid yaoi-lover.. But I agree, I have a hard time seeing a fitting moment for that to happen. Still though, it would've been smoldering hot.

    Two thumbs up though! Great work!
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  • From ANON - Avery-kun on November 16, 2006
    I TOTALLY HAD SO MUCH MORE WRITTEN. *thrashes, cries, etc.*

    I forget what it all was now, too. ;-; Moar of me begging for you to finish at the expense of my sanity, more of my utter WORSHIP and fangirling, and me begging you to email me sometime so we can get to know each other in my hopes that some of your fantastic writing skills with rub off on me. Because mine pale in comparison to yours T~T

    Obligatory squee! Dark Dark Dark, I love me some Dark. And NO! The only love he has for Ganondorf is the sort-of love a child has for a superior that he worships; he has the strongest need to please and to make him proud. Like in Ender's Shadow. Bean just wants to be noticed by Ender, praised by him. It's not an Oedipus complex or anything. ...Because I say so? XD I don't know. That's what I get from the story anyway. x:

    ANYWAY. I have indirectly promised a friend of mine that I'd write her a Kafei x Link slashfic... and I will most definitely be tapping this fic as a resourse.

    oh and also did you know this fic has it's very own tab in MAI FIREFOX BROWSER? mmhmm it does oh yes it's true. I added it in hopes you'd update it, and I checked it once a week~. And reread it more than once. XD

    This is long and email like, yech.

    Write more, s'il vous plait!
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