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Reviews for Getting Closer

By : Nediar
  • From ANON - Nieni on September 09, 2005
    Yeah, for the record, Solid Snake's name is David as confirmed by the ending to MGS. Remember, Snake Eater takes place decades before MGS, during the cold war. It's not Solid Snake you're playing. And um... back to the story... yes... nice work! Very cute, and I enjoyed this coupling.
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  • From ANON - bicyclewreck on August 24, 2005
    I'm only at Chapter 2 so far and I am loving it... but in regards to the comment above, isn't Solid Dave and Naked John??
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  • From ANON - deryk and varen on August 23, 2005
    snakes real name is john not dave(play metal gear solid 3 snake eater) . good story besides that little mistake write more.
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  • From ANON - Ri on July 14, 2005
    What?! You are done? Whaaaaaaaaaa!! Noooooo!! T_T I love this story....*sniff sniff* Okay I understand. Lovly sotry you did here. ^^
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  • From ANON - Anngi on July 11, 2005
    OMG!!! I got hooked to Metal Gear this last weekend at a friends place, we were both drooling over Raiden and Snake´s suits and some scenes in the game xDD And this is the first fic I´ve read of them.

    Please, it´s pretty good, I want to go on learning n___n Great work so far!
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  • From ANON - Juna on June 19, 2005
    Awwww this chapter was sweet. I love it. I can't wait to read more. You are doing such a lovely job. Keep it up ya? ^^
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  • From ANON - W.A. on May 12, 2005
    Sweet, I hope to read more. Keep it going.
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  • From secondson on April 16, 2005
    This is coming along nicely. I love their chemistry in chapter two, very heartfelt and well-captured. Great work so far, and I'd love to see more.
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  • From ANON - Juna on April 15, 2005
    So sweet! I am likely this alot! I hope this chapter isn't the last one! Please keep it going!
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  • From ANON - Ri on March 31, 2005
    Hey that was real good. ^^ And for someone who said that english isn't their mother language, well i give you props cause you did well. I hope you can continue ^^
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  • From secondson on March 30, 2005
    That was really good. Nice characterisation, and I liked the way you captured their exchanges. Your English isn't that bad, either - I wouldn't have known it wasn't your native language if you hadn't pointed it out :)
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