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Reviews for Vergil remembers

By : PandoraMasters
  • From ANON - Enrique on August 07, 2005
    WOW, this was definitely one of your hottest stories so far. Damn it, now you made me a bit horny
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  • From ANON - Hamza on August 07, 2005
    I liked this one actually! and for the first time EVER, i read it from beggining to end WITHOUT skipping to the sex scenes lol (i should be f*ckin rewarded or that!...seein as im a 'lameman' lol) Some quotes made me laugh; “I was trying to seduce you two and I’m not good at it alright!?” lol from that quote ALONE you can tell shes a vigin lol However, when i read "She gritted her teeth" at THAT moment, i thought she was bein butt-f*cked lol. The sentence afterwards cleared my confusion. Great story V, keep it up!.....Only 1 thing i didn't get.....

    “God you’re so sweet, Lady…” As Dante parted his mouth from hers, his eyes bore into hers for a moment, grabbed the breast that was not being mauled by his brother, and the feel of Vergil’s sucking was making her deflowered pussy so wet and hot that she didn’t realize Vergil’s hard member was at the base of her womanhood. “I’ll be first, Dante….” Was all she heard before he nearly pushed in, Dante’s hands pulled her away. She heard the younger twin growl, “Damn you, Vergil….just because you’re the oldest.”

    ......So...did they do it or what?
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  • From ANON - sonlyme on August 07, 2005
    mmmm....too hot. How could one not long for more when you've got us to this fevered point??? So WHO gets to be first???
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  • From Lianna on August 06, 2005
    *jaw drops* wow...that was hot
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  • From ANON - Lori on August 06, 2005
    UPDATE FASTER DAMMIT!!! I love this STORY!!!!
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  • From ANON - Tony on August 06, 2005
    Whoa, OK, I just can't help myself, I'm turned on now :o. That was just, wow, that was one of the most lustful things I've ever read without it breaking down into senselessness. At first it was just promising and kinda funny, but once you had those three together, man did you turn the heat up fast! Usually when people write these things they exaggerate certain things, measurements being a favourite, but arousal is quite common too, however this time, I think I could actually believe how wet Lady was, being a virgin, with these two, if I was a woman I think I'd be that wet myself, haha XD! This was a really enticing read, and a brilliant tribute to the arts of build-up and anticipation 8).
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  • From ANON - MM on July 29, 2005
    ^_~
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  • From ANON - Eric on July 27, 2005
    Very good. Well-detailed and uhm... I don't know what to say! It's just vééééry juicy!
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  • From ANON - Eric on July 27, 2005
    Haha this one is just like you said it was: Naughty! Never though Vergil had a perverted mind. *evades al the rotten fruit and vegetables thrown at him by fangirls* Ok, I think I got to go now! Bye!!
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  • From ANON - faye on July 12, 2005
    I read all 6 and I love them there all great! Each one has its own inspiring sex appeal, which makes it great!
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  • From ANON - Dante on May 30, 2005
    loved the latest chapter, mate! very detailed, very gorgeous writing! ^^ well done. *Jester-esque clapping* invite me to that party sometime! ~Dante S.
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  • From ANON - camerilla on May 29, 2005
    How she returned vergil? I would like to know.... pls update
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  • From ANON - Bustahead on May 29, 2005
    (whistles)
    Wow! How on earth do you think of these things? It's so kinky! But you know that; I told you already! XD

    I can see what's so different, you've used first person perspective. Isn't that like, a very VERY difficult thing to do? Especially for a scene such as this? I thought writing a first person battle scene was hard enough when I did it, but this? (whistles again) woah
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  • From ANON - Tony it is on May 29, 2005
    Well, that was something a little different. I mean, all your chapters in this have passion but this one had outright lust on a whole new level. It was cool, it had a different feel and your switching POV trick made both characters so damn sexy in each others eyes, clever. You did pretty well bringing their passion to life, like their disbelief of how good it felt, that was described very well, and so was Lady's lust in the beginning, hah, I had no idea girls could throb with desire like that too.

    On a side note, is it me or does this huge text box coupled with the tiny font size seem designed to make reviewers feel inadaquate unless they type a lot?

    Anyway, it was very good overall, if I have to pick out some flaws, the only thing I could think of is the handcuffs and blindfold seemed to come and go without explanation, or if they were there it was difficult to tell and for how long. For example I could be wrong, but when Lady took control it didn't seem like she was blindfolded and handcuffed then, but I don't know when they came off (if the cuffs ever went on, I don't think they did). Anyway, these are minor points because I heard somewhere a balanced review is the most helpful thing an author can get, although if you ask me a winning lottery ticket would be more helpful 9 times out of 10, but now I'm wandering from the topic. So, in conclusion, a very lustful and intense piece which was a lot of fun to read, and hardly any shortcomings (pun?), great work, and don't stop anytime too soon.
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  • From ANON - sonlyme on May 29, 2005
    Damn...that got quite a reaction...lady is SO hot...This devil boy doesn't have a chance...
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