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By : manipulate
  • From on November 24, 2005
    Nice...Not bad...
    Heh...MELIKE! ^_^

    It's okay to write poems instead of stories, but most people like stories!
    Well...Anyway: It's very nice! Indeed! ^_^
    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Tori on September 12, 2005
    Yeah......I like poems and all.....but this one just didn't seem like it was thought out. First of all, I'm not getting into the spelling because English might not be your first language so I don't want to upset you like that. And never ever explain what your poem means.....it just diminishes the emotions. The general idea for the poem was great, you just needed to smooth it out a little.
    -Tori
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  • From on May 30, 2005
    I like poems and all. But some advice: I don't think people are going to like this fanfic if you put everything in poems, short ones even. Mostly, people go for detailed descriptions and scenes. And they're pretty long. I think you should read some of my fanfictions before continue on, it could give you an idea on what to do. Perhaps.. I'm not saying your first chapter is bad or anything just.. Well, I guess I just like poems, I dunno how to say it in another way.
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