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Reviews for At The End Of The Tunnel

By : Breech_Loader
  • From Kanorshkan on July 21, 2009
    Hey, I used to be known as "Not Given" because I didn't have an account on here yet. I made an account especially for your stories ( yeah, I like em that much) and wanted to let you know that I think this story is possibly the best one I've read so far. Even with the limited sex. =] I dunno, maybe it's just because it's not so bitter of a story or something. More of my style I guess. It's been great so far and you really know how to make a good villain(Cur). Consensual sex is much better than rape too. For the constructive criticism part... I'd have to say that the only thing I found was some of the spelling. Hey, it's gotta be hard to look over a whole book and find a few misspelled words. Keep it coming. Oh, and when will there be more Universe Backstabber?
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  • From ANON - Macropodathist1 on August 11, 2006
    I'm seeing several flaws in this story just on the first chapter...

    Tails' parents are named Amadeus and Rosemary.

    The leader of the Acorn Royal Guard is... Ok, somehow I forgot his first name. But it's Antoine's father. General something DeCoolette.
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  • From ANON - Anthony on September 28, 2005
    Sorry about not reviewing chapter 14. But I just got to reading it. For that I will review both with this review.
    Chapter 14: It was okay I knew I would come to truly hate Curtis. But it left me with an empty feeling like something was missing.
    Chapter 15: It was awesome (Now I know what really happened to shadow at the end of SA2, jk.), though I must say I am curious what happened to two of the Chaos Emeralds. Also will you be bringing in the Master Emerald or no.
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  • From ANON - J. Winter on September 27, 2005
    Well THAT sure thew me for a loop. But a very interesting surprise, nonetheless. And the end of the chapter.... oh boy, that's quite the cruel cliffhanger. But, with cruel cliffhangers, you know something awesome awaits after. :D
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  • From ANON - The Dark Chao on September 26, 2005
    And once again another couple of chapters I cant find many complaints for! Nice touch with the whole ark/shadow thing. I didnt see it comming thats for sure! mmmmmk I must say i have a couple of ideas on curt but I wont share them. Any way I cant wait to read more but I guess I will. huh?
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  • From ANON - J Winter on September 21, 2005
    Ack! I got lax in reading this. So sorry. ^^;

    Anyhow, I can tell already that Curtis is a bastard near through and through. From when he was just the mystery character in the shadows, he's someone who would betray anyone to get in his way. And these two chapters just reinforce it all the more. Seems he and Breech have a bit of a past, which has me all the more intrigued. Something tells me we're in for a blow us out of our seats twist soon enough.

    And now espionage, Chaos Emeralds, and the Dark Legion (or so it seems) have been thrown in the mix. Excellent. I can't wait to see what you will do with this.
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  • From ANON - The Dark Chao on September 13, 2005
    Another couple of chapters and I am still loving this as much as ever. nothing in paticular to comment about this time though so keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Anthony Harland on September 12, 2005
    It's Armageddeon, cats and dogs getting along. lol, I love the steady building relationship. And I believe I hate Curtis for the right reasons. I can't wait to see what you do with the chaos emeralds.
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  • From tailsprower on September 06, 2005
    This is good! I just read all the chapters. I bet you know me from somewhere (My name will give you a hint).

    good, I like to read about fanfics like this. A good mix of sex, fighting, killing, and blood. Plus some drugs and alchohol.

    I rated it a 4 out of 5.
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  • From ANON - J Winter on September 05, 2005
    Wahoo, more character development! More common ground, a litle bit of angst, and some karma to boot. And good ol' Buttnik still lives. A factory accident isn't gonna be the end of him! And we meet that figure who's been hiding out at last, and a new mision to be had with. Who needs sex when you've got all this excitement?
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  • From ANON - Anthony on September 05, 2005
    LOL. That was beautiful. Though I didn't say I wanted a sex scene, (though it would be nice) I just said that I thought you had mentioned something about one in the prologue of an earlier chapter. I love the plot twists and karma based events. I even wrote my own story as I read further into "At The End Of The Tunnel". With my own characters, and if I ever post it I will create you for the inspiration.
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  • From ANON - Anthony Harland on September 01, 2005
    I love the story I can't help but read it. The further you go the more I want. Though didn't you say something about a sex scene at the beginning of one of the other chapters.
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  • From zentillion on August 30, 2005
    Oh ho ho ho, nice. The corruption of the Kingdom revealed... More suspense builds, before Geoff gets what was coming to him, Max dies literally at Breech's hands... And James, now certainly a fugitive, no longer cares, and will go wherever the wind... and Breech will take him. And Robotnik dying? Nice. But somehow, knowing ol' Buttnik, it's probably one of his clever ruses. Factory accident? Pshaw. But if he's really dead, that's good, too. Means Needlenose may get his chance, but that's up to you guys. Excellent chapter.
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  • From ANON - The Dark Chao on August 29, 2005
    Sorry I was late to reviewing ^^; I had Recently moved to a new house and I couldnt get my internet up for like a month and a half. Anyway onto the reveiw of all the new chapters! I never thought id say this but I like this more then U.B.:3 . It must really pay off to work with a partner huh? I have to say I feel sorry for poor james and breech but hey atleast breech got what she's been wanting. Now I would go into a reveiw of every chapter but im faar to lasy for that. Heh thats prolly why I dont make fanfics myself. Anyway cant wait to see what happens next!
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  • From zentillion on August 13, 2005
    What a lovely chapter... an endearing nightmare sequence, more Robotnik bastardry than you can shake a sword at, the retrurn of the mysterious figure who now seems to know quite a bit about James... A on-toes-keeping chapter that has answers but yet doesn't. Very good.
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