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Reviews for Pride: Continued

By : yf17
  • From ANON - Anon on June 02, 2013
    So, what hapened to that next chapter?
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  • From swartzvald on November 21, 2012
    Soooooo, that next chapter ready yet?
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  • From fooxie on January 27, 2007
    please post the new chapter "Revelations"!!! Been waiting forever......this story is amazing and very very steamy....want to see how chun-li and ryu's relationship unfolds....please and thanks
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  • From ANON - fangirl on November 12, 2006
    It was well-written and all but it didn't satisfy me in terms of it being a continuation of "Pride" by Akikaze. Your story seems to have put an abrupt end to the power struggle between Ryu and Chun-Li, which is one thing that made the original so scorchingly hot. It was like suddenly Ryu utterly dominated and crushed Chun-Li...especially that end scene when he just jizzed all over Chun-Li's unconcioius body. In the other fic there was more tension in the power struggle and it was difficult for one of them to up the other. Maybe it's because I'm female but that was the major appeal for me in the orignal fic. It was hot seeing Chun-Li have that control over Ryu only to loose it moments later when Ryu would overwhelm her, and it went back and forth. Anyway, I still think your fic is great but maybe it would be better of as a stand-alone rather than a continuation of Akikaze's fanfic.
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  • From ANON - Josh on September 08, 2006
    Hey nice story I think Ryu and Chun-Li are a good couple. Hope you update soon. I wish people had a nag to put more than there writings but put something more into it
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  • From ANON - PantsFaerie on August 20, 2006
    ......Now see, last night, my boyfriend was surfing this site and after about half an hour I got molested. YAY!
    But I wanted to know why. Now I do, simply cause he lfet this window open.

    I frigging love you.
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  • From ANON - demonslayer205 on August 09, 2006
    I liked the original pride story, and you did it justice with this one. The sex was great, and I think I speak for all of the fans of this fic when I say we look forward to the next one, which hopefully will be soon.
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  • From ANON - rosiemary on July 03, 2006
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    O. oh my god

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  • From ANON - AT on December 31, 2005
    I can't wait to read the next chapter; when's it going to come up?!
    Only criticism I might have is to watch your tenses: During the retrospectives/thoughts, it sometimes switches to present-tense (Ryu's bit on Chun-Li's faults and merits), while the rest is usually past-tense. It doesn't matter so much when it's an italicized-thought part, but whole paragraphs that are "in-the-head" yet part of the story (he really admired this about her, he adored that part about her, etc.) kinda disrupt the flow. Of course, this is all personal stylistic preference, but it did manage to catch my attention when I read it. All in all, it does nothing to detract from the fact that it's a good, fun, steamy story!
    I suppose you're in school, if you're busy writing "academic papers", as your author's note stated, but don't forget about the poor, languishing fans! I'm really interested in the direction that you're taking the story! You did promise another chapter, after all, and I can't reread the same story forever.
    More props to you, and I hope you're having a nice holiday season!
    Happy New Year's!
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  • From ANON - moine on December 11, 2005
    Continue please!!! I really like this story...constantly checking if there has been any updates but gues not anyways can't wait for the next chappie to come out.
    This is definitely one of the best Ryu/Chun-li stories, I hope you continue to write. =)
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 19, 2005
    You said a week tops, its been a month. This better be one huge assed chapter
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  • From ANON - fooxie on October 12, 2005
    Update....really good, i've read the prequel and waiting for the next chappie~!! Ryu/Chun-Li all the way
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  • From ANON - adrenaline on October 12, 2005
    I love Ryu/Chun-li pairing and love all your stories.....very descriptive and even though there's lots of sex scene you have a really good plot.....looking forward to seeing the next chappies and other Ryu/Chun-li related stories!!! update
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  • From yf17 on October 03, 2005
    Do I plan on continuing this fic? You bet!
    Thanks for all the great reviews thus far. I have not jumped ship! Sorry about the lengthy wait. I have the next chapter almost completed, just a few more paragraphs and some fine-tuning. Trust me, next chapter is gonna be a BIG one. Hope that gets you guys excited to start checking here a bit more over the next few days.

    BTW, Akikaze said the rating jumped a bit. Now it seems to have settled on the fourth star. Never knew about the fluctuation part, but if someone really got a problem with this story, let me know either through the review or a direct email. Please don't fool around with the rating too much for no reason.

    See you guys in a few days (maybe a week max?)
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  • From ANON - yeah on October 02, 2005
    bas ass!!! continue plz!
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