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Reviews for Camping

By : lolchan
  • From ANON - Anon on December 18, 2014
    This story is really interesting, in a really good way. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - White Dragon on December 10, 2005
    ack! *dies*

    Quick! Chapter two!! =^_^= whoot! I love it! netto and Yuu are so cute together they need more fics.
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  • From ANON - Sgt. Frog Fangirl on November 05, 2005
    *jumps up and down and claps* Yay! Some nice father-son SMUT!! *blush* Please write more!! ;3

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  • From ANON - Toki on November 05, 2005
    *grin* *eeeevil grin* hehehheh. nice fic
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  • From FrostofEgarath on September 21, 2005
    "You're going to give me the sex-talk, aren't you?" *giggles*

    Maa...I liked this story (as a PWP, mind you), though there were definitely both pros and cons. First off the character were, as other have remarked before me, very "in character", at least from my point of view. Also, the smut was good, and kinda proper. ^.^ Also, putting Netto and Yuuichiro together is a good idea in the first place.

    The most remarkable con for my part: the very convenient chain of events that led up to this "educational measure": the rain, the soaked duffel bag...and of course, Yuuichiro's intentions. ~.~ Also, how can you have running water without electricity? Though, all in all, a good fanfic.
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  • From ANON - Kazder on August 21, 2005
    To some of the people who posted before me: Stop being wussies. You liked it, you want more. Don't be shy telling the author you want more, because none of us know you, so you don't have to hide it. >.>
    Anyways, I love this story. I came back this morning to see if the second chapter was finished. Alas, it wasn't, but I'm writing this review, so.. Yay. I love how you had Yuuichirou's thought pop up when he agreed to show Netto how men "do it." Second, I love how he acts like a loving father while doing this. *huggles Yuuichirou cause he's DAMN HOT*

    Mm, there were a few mistakes (I.E. Quotation marks missing), but even with those mistakes, I give this story five stars!! ^-^
    Oh, crap, I've got to write my fan-fic! >.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 14, 2005
    Well, this isn't a pairing one encounters often. But you make it seem plausible.
    Hope to see more ^_^
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  • From ANON - DC on August 10, 2005
    This story is very well written... It would be interesting to see how another chapter will proceed...
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  • From ANON - dip on July 31, 2005
    *blush* um.... could you like... write more?? PLEASE!??? *cough* i mean, the story structure was very well put together as well as the fact the characters were still very much in character durring the whole story. And... JUST WRITE MORE OK!!! *eh hem* i'm sorry. (takes pills) Can't wait to read more of your stufff =3
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  • From ANON - Smidge on July 16, 2005
    ... dear god, I never thought I'd read a father/son pairing... much less like it. I feel dirtier than usual after reading one of these stories... ^-^; However, I must say that while it seems totally impossible that it'd ever happen, somehow, you've made it seem slightly plausible. Um... is there going to be a second chapter? ^-^;;;
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  • From ANON - sirhcnotlih on July 15, 2005
    Nicely done. Very well written.

    5 out of 5!

    PS- Will there be a 2nd chappie?
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