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By : SakuraBubblesMOO
  • From ANON - Olivetree on April 06, 2013
    This fanfiction is so perfect~ You've portrayed them very realistically, and everything was just so much well-written and overally pleasant to read...I could read it over and over again and never get tired of it. I praise your writing skills as well as the maturity you let shine through them ^^ I wanted to keep praising you, but I think if I kept on I would end up only blabbering forever in happiness. Keep up the greatness!
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  • From ANON - Homunculus2501 on September 29, 2006
    Zomg. Very very nice. I like the concept of Albel having his first kiss/make out session/fuck with Fayt aswell. Just seems.....fitting. Like he really wound t waste it on anyone but someone he cared deeply for and trusted, which the only person alive that he feels all that for is, of course, Fayt
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  • From ANON - Jaded on January 17, 2006
    I must say that this piece was beautifully written. You came a little close to Albel being OOC, but pulled it off wonderfully regardless. The Lemon was also great, not too fluffy, while keeping to the sexiness that makes one enjoyable. Great job. I hope you write more Star Ocean soon!
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  • From Kouun on January 10, 2006
    This was so great! I've never actually played any of these games, but I saw this pairing somewhere and thought the characters were cute together and wanted to read up on them haha. I must say this is definitely one of the best lemons I've read on here! Not too nasty, and lots of fluff, just the way I like it xD Thanks for taking the time to make a nice long oneshot, instead of rushing through it and having a crap end product lol. Great job on this--please write more sometime ;3
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  • From ANON - Morality_Of_Sin on December 13, 2005
    WOW!! That was a great story! I can't tell you how long I've been searching for a fic just like that. *bows to you in praise* You nailed both Albel and Fayt's pesonas so well, and your writing itself is just like....wow. PLEASE write more! If you need a story idea I'll be happy to supply you with one! Just e-mail me! I was gonna write it myself but I'm having too much trouble with Albel and Fayt's reactions to events. T.T I feel that you however, would write it perfectly! Please keep up the posting!
    Your fan,
    Morality_Of_Sin
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  • From Erim on December 12, 2005
    I liked it very much, what did say? I LOVED IT!!!!
    I LOVE YOU FOR THIS!!! LoL. I hope you write
    much more fics like this in the future of Fayt and Albel.
    I love the pair AlbelxFayt

    -Erim-
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  • From ANON - mysticneko on November 04, 2005
    I hate how Albel is always calling Fayt an idiot or maggot. Thats not something you say to someone you just had sex with. Plus they are rather unintelligent comebacks. If he's so smart he should say something else.
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  • From ANON - Raichan on August 21, 2005
    O_O Wow.Albel being gentle and caring.Now THAT'S a sight to see.I like the title and how you described their relationship.And I thank you for making them say "I love you" to each other.So far ALL and i mean all of the fics I read never had Albel or Fayt saying "I love you" to each other.It was driving me nuts.^_^ Really nice story you got here and a bit funny.Hehe.The other fics I read also had Albel wearing...nothing underneath.Hahaha.I LOVE this story.It's really hot.I hope you write others as hot as this one.Never reviewed these stories before.You gave me the courage to write a review for this kind of fic.^^ Thank you.I'll try and review the rest of your stories.See ya next time!
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  • From ANON - Kaede on August 18, 2005
    That was simply amazing. -_____- (that's supposed to be a satisfied face). There's not enough Albie and Fayt smut, and there damn well should be. *loves them* Heheh...you do realise Fayt's vow at the end makes a sequel almost obligatory.....? *clutches onto your leg* Please consider one, oh great Sakura-san! lol.
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  • From ANON - Lethal Feathers on August 07, 2005
    This was BEAUTIFUL!!!!
    Encore, ENCORE!!!! Bravo! Your writing style astounds me! Amazing! I asume this is a common pairing? I'm not sure. I've only read a few Star Ocean fics, so, I'm not smpletely sure. AlbelXFate has now made it onto my top 5 favorite pairings list and is my favorite pairing now...all thanks to this fic! This was extremely well written, hardly a flaw. I think that has to have been one of the best lemons that I've read all summer! Please, keep writing. I have yet to check out your other fics, but, be sure that I'm going to do so. Expect much positive feed back on this. Thank You...And Goodnight!

    ~Lethal Feathers
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  • From ANON - Lilly on August 06, 2005
    I'm kind of glad that Sophia is not in this one or else she would be mad I do like Sophia only as freinds nothing more nothing less. ah so now what is going to happen who well they run into in the morning or who well come look fore them? and get a suprised to see them like that, or maybe they are alone fore now but I can see someone standing there speechless or shocked that would be kind of funny I think...
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  • From ANON - HopefulAngel on August 03, 2005
    /claps/ This fic...Is so GREAT!!!! GREAT I SAY!! This was my first time reading a fic for this pairing and wow! I love this pairing and this fic! I would have to say that this fic is one of the best I read! And I read alot of fics and only two of them are as good as this! Great job on this fic! Please write more!! You have such great writing!! I LOVE YOU!! :D Great job again I hope to read more of your fics!
    Love ya!
    -HopefulAngel
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  • From ANON - Gysecune on July 21, 2005
    Most awesome sentences:

    "...He always had his eyes on other people, studying them for their faults so that he could feel a little better about his own. Looking to Fayt, he could never find any.

    "It was just a hug and Albel, to be honest, always looked like he needed a few."

    “'With all of the times I’ve thought about it, I think I should be good,' Albel said with a smirk."

    I love how you explained what Albel's REAL reason was for letting Fayt and Co. go at the Kirlsa Training Facility. And then Albel bit Fayt. XD Only one correction: "Un-phased" is actually spelled "unfazed." The whole thong exchange really made me laugh. XD I agree with you on the Albel kissing thing, too. Okay, so! To finish off, I'd just like to say that your characterization is wonderful, as usual, and the flow of things in this story was really smooth and natural.

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  • From ANON - Jassmine on July 20, 2005
    That was the hottest Fayt/Albel fic I've ever read. Way to go and keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Minako on July 19, 2005
    I like it.
    Good work. yeah it make me want to see what the morning well be like win Albel and Fayt wakes up I wonder who well find out they are a couple not unless they are alone. but yeah the fight between who gets to be on top is now beging but you're fic sounds to be a good one so keep up the good work. can't wait fore chap2. to get done and no rush on it so I'll say good luck on this one. but yeah I do like the couples I hope it stay like that so who else are a couple around there beside Albel and Fayt?...

    tbc...?
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