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Reviews for Torn Asunder

By : Atroxian
  • From ANON - Anon on November 24, 2005
    Cool. Sticky demon entrails. Thank god I'm a doctor, ohterwise I would have thrown up. :]
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  • From Tukee on August 22, 2005
    YOU KILLED ME???? YOU BASTARD!!! You will pay for your insolence! HAHA gross, but well written flick....Now I will resurect myself and get my revenge on you....hehehehe

    On another note....I like what you wrote about stories having some kind of plot...thats exactly how I write 2.....if you join another site, mail it to me so that I can follow your stories!

    -The Dark Prince

    PS....Can I have my spine back now?
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  • From ANON - Braindead Bird (too lazy to log in) on August 16, 2005
    Wahey! I loved all that violence and gore, especially in the imagery of the spine being ripped out. Very gruesome, but brilliant. Excellent story. The last sentence was great too, because it was totally unexpected. "Happy Birthday Vergil". What?!? That concluded everything and wrapped it up in a comfy bundle. Keep up the good work and have a nice day!

    PS. having a review page used as a message board isn't so bad. I've seen a story in which it was used to flame other reviewers (it was like a battlefield!) and another one in which a STORY was posted in a review. o_O;;
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  • From ANON - Jade Tokier on August 16, 2005
    I really hate using people's review boards as message boards...it's just rude. Do you have an email? Or AIM?
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  • From ANON - Confused fan on August 16, 2005
    yeah I know whatcha mean. ^^; but you did ask for those requests and no matter. Just enjoy whatever you wanna write.
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  • From on August 15, 2005
    *laughs* I am not saying people can't write it. That is their choice. I am just saying, I'm sick of it and because of that fact I don't read. Or just very rarely....lol I actually heeded my own advice on this. If I don't like it, I won't read it. People can write whatever the hell they want...doesn't mean I have to read it. I'm just sick of people trying to tell others that they can't write blood and gore or violence or just a story with a plot because this aff.
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  • From ANON - Confused fan on August 15, 2005
    wow thanks for the fast response. Ithink that means you are kitty? ^^; but I have seen you defend people who write only sex sex sex. I thinkyou are a very nice person and you should just let people write sex sex sex if they want. I wil look to your profile.
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  • From on August 15, 2005
    Also, if you have not yet visited my profile you will see that 80% of the sex fics I have written were requested. My fiction that I have written on my own, yes has one or two sex scenes in it, but is mainly a plot filled story. I like plots. If I want to read sex I will just read a PWP. But my story Power and Gift of Plenty, and Carmen are all requested fics. There are a couple others too.
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  • From on August 15, 2005
    To Confused fan, yes I do write them myself because sadly I have seen the reviews that those who try to think outside the box get. Allow me to elaborate:

    THIS IS AFF! IT IS SUPPOSED TO BE NOTHING BUT SEX SEX SEX! YOU ARE NOT ALLOWED TO WRITE ANYTHING ELSE BECAUSE IT HAS TO BE ABOUT SEX SEX SEX!

    I as well as you probably know that 3/4 of the people that write and/or come to this site are virginal 13 or 14 year olds. I am not saying all I am saying most.

    Yes I do write it and I am quitting this site soon, those being one of the reasons for it. I will be going to different sites to actually be able to write stories with plots. As someone said, characters cannot just drop everything they are doing to have sex, which is what most of these people want.

    I am sick of writing it. There can no new ideas to writing sex. After a while it becomes the same thing. This site is for dark fics and NC-17 fics...I know this site promotes sex, but it still says Dark Fics or Hard R. Sex falls under NC-17. I just don't feel like dealing with the criticism if and when I do begin to write an actual story.

    Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Confused fan on August 15, 2005
    why is Kitty sick of the vignettes here? Is she not writing them herself all the time?
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  • From ANON - Jade Tokier on August 15, 2005
    Well like I said I do love this a lot sweetheart and thank you for remembering what I said about this. It truly does mean a lot...so more gore please!
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