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Reviews for ChrisxHugo (working title)

By : WrathofShogoe
  • From ANON - Wrathchylde on August 30, 2005
    This is the pairing I most wanted to see myself though canon doesn't leave too much room for it. Keep going on this one.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 24, 2005
    Sadly, you're forgetting to address the only valid reason why the pairing makes no sense: their personalities. There's no compatibility between them, no reason whatever why they'd have feelings for one another--particularly on Chris's part, since Hugo is essentially remarkably similar to Borus in personality, yet Chris shows 0 interest whatever in Borus (or any of her peers).

    You people get so hung up on the minor technicalities like dead friends and age gaps that you completely ignore the most important issues of whether the people THEMSELVES would make such a relationship possible. And in Chris and Hugo's case, the very concept is absurd. Not impossible, but to do it WELL, you'd have to work long and hard to develop each person's personality (believably) from the people they are to people who could fall in love--no small feat, especially considering how complex characters they are to begin with (Chris especially).

    So yeah. Right now? This is still out of character and unbelievable, and shows no likelihood of changing.
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  • From ANON - Nino on August 24, 2005
    You'd better continue! This fic looks really promising so far. :)

    And don't worry about things like lack of reviews - I've found a lot of stories at this site lacking a good amount of reviews, even if the stories themselves are really well-written. I for one definitely want to and will read more, as well as any other ChrisxHugo fan on this site (and I know there are some!).

    I'm glad my review helped, too; the manga may be slightly different from the game (much more emotional IMHO), but it does stay true to the general storyline, especially with Hugo as Flame Champion. I wouldn't doubt the end of the manga would be similar, as well~

    So please, keep going!
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  • From ANON - Nino on August 22, 2005
    You know, if the pairing seems less probable in terms of the manga storyline, you could always go with what happened in the game in contrast.

    *some spoilers* At the end of the game, if you chose Hugo to be the Flame Champion, he shows that he has matured a lot and although he still hasn't completely forgiven Chris yet (that would still take some time on his part), he ends things on a friendly note with her, and even gives her a hug "it's the Karayan way". And when she hugs him back, that's one of the very few times she actually smiles in the game...

    Also, if you haven't, you should read some other fanfiction on the pairing; a lot of them managed to make the pairing really work out in terms of canon.

    I hope you do manage to make this story more "adult"; I've been wanting to read one between the two for a long, long time. Keep in mind though that they're now both immortal by the True Runes they possess - they'd only age mentally, not physically. Age shouldn't matter though; Chris is 22 in the game, and Hugo is 15, but I can still see them together no matter the age difference. Such differences never mattered in terms of older times, anyway.

    I hope to see you actually write this!
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