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Reviews for Sins of the Flesh

By : Moridin
  • From ThePairingGuy on December 04, 2008
    I just realized that my first review may have come off as a little too critical. I made it sound like chapter 1 isn't good at all, when really it's awesome(although not nearly as awesome as chapter 2). It's just that it had a few problems which chapter 2 didn't have, that kept it from being as outstanding as it could have been. I'm only criticizing because this is one of the best fics in the GS section, and without the problems it would be absolutely perfect.

    Also, I've now read most of the stories in the GS section, and I'm putting this one in the Top Five GS fics on my profile page. It really is that good.
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  • From ThePairingGuy on October 22, 2008
    This is outstanding stuff. Sensual, descriptive, and the characters are convincing. The trouble is, the sex in chapter 1 is a bit overdone. Too idealized. And no offense, but "with the greatest feeling of pleasure ever" sounds like something a five-year-old would say. Also, you use the adjective "incestuous" too much. I felt like you kept saying to me, "So did I mention that this is incest? That's right, incest. Isn't that hot?"

    Chapter 2 is much better. The sex is more real than in chapter 1, and for that reason it's actually twice as arousing. The part where Felix couldn't hold in long enough for Jenna to have her orgasm just blew my mind. The only thing is that the ending is too sudden... they just abruptly decide to stop what they're doing. You need to do a continuation where Jenna has Felix's baby, and how they deal with that. That would make this already spectacular fic even more awesome.
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  • From ANON - Cyberchao X on September 28, 2008
    Wow. Incest with a conscience. Still, I've looked all over this site, and I haven't seen the one pairing I REALLY want: Felix/Sheba. C'mon, Felix was such a noble hero atop Venus Lighthouse, diving off the edge after her...It's romantic. And even though it looks like more because Felix looks a little older than he is and Sheba a bit younger, they're only four years apart. Not so strange...
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  • From ANON - Cyberchao X on September 28, 2008
    Mmm...yes, good.
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  • From raistuumum on September 04, 2007
    The first chapter was good; the second was a half-assed ending and a complete cop out and would be better if it wasn't there.
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  • From ANON - Eclipse on July 08, 2006
    not bad.
    have you considered a Shiba/Ivan
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  • From ANON - Kokoromotonai on October 23, 2005
    Screw other people's thoughts! They love eachother and they love making love to one another, so why not? Besides, anal won't get Jenna pregnant. I just hope she isn't. If she is, they're screwed. In the bad way.
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  • From ANON - J Winter on October 18, 2005
    Verrrry tasty. Since it seems to be on the subject of incest currently, how about throwing some Ivan/Hama into the mix? I mean, who's done that before? ^^;
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  • From ANON - Blood Prince on October 15, 2005
    YES!! Great chapter





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  • From ANON - One Who Rides On The Wind on October 01, 2005
    Seriously, they'd be the ultimate pairing if only they weren't related. Back onto your fic. Well written, no grammar mistakes from what I could see so it's damn near perfect. Also, if you continue this, can you write a Felix/Mia softshipping? As a separate thing. That'd be great!

    You rock!

    ~*~The Wind Rider~*~
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  • From ANON - Mikaa on September 14, 2005
    Lord, and it took how long for someone to get that pairing up on this site? When were those games released again?

    Felix/Jenna IS a very interesting source for a lemon, even if you left out the whole incest bit. Then again, THAT does add a bit of "flavor," no? Maybe I do want to get back to that lemon I was writing...

    ::ahem::

    The fic was suprisingly good, given the usual lack of quality lemons these days (not to mention quality fics, though that's another gripe for another day), and I hope that you will write more for this pairing and other ones.

    And as far as ideas for other pairings, I don't know what to really say that has not been done. True, Piers(Picard, depending on where you go)/Mia is rare, but probably one of the most... I don't know. One person once suggested to me Garet/Dora (as in, Garet does his best friend's mother), Ivan/Hamma (either using the theory of her actually being his sister, or the ol' theory of her being his mother), Ivan/Sheba (assuming you wanted to use the theory mill again for their possible "siblingship"), or even Alex/Jenna (yeah, a semi-popular one, one that even *I* have done, but still a challenge if you think about it).

    The choices are rather limited, unless you stray into yaoi/yuri. And with THAT, I shall run away to whatever hole I crawled out of in the first place to curse this thing called the internet with my pathetic presence.

    OR maybe I'll just say keep up the good work and go do something else.

    Mikaa
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  • From ANON - Megaman-Omega on September 09, 2005
    Very nice I like it and I have nothing to complain about (which is saying something because I always some little thing to complain about) but if you're looking for ideas for a pairing try something else no one has done before I was thinking that you could do a Piers/Mia fic sometime after the incident on the Jupiter lighthouse just a thought.
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  • From ANON - Kyarorain on September 09, 2005
    Awesome! Incest for GS is so rare, and I'm glad to see you've written some now... I'd love to see more of your work. ^^
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  • From ANON - Dark Guy on September 09, 2005
    That was really good. Do more. Have Felix fuck her ass.
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