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Reviews for Her Only Cure

By : Endurance
  • From Vook on April 08, 2008
    I signed up just so I could review this story...I'm absolutely stunned. Most of the stuff I've read here so far is something only a 2-year-old with an incredibly sick mind would write. And I don't normally go for incest, but I was just curious to see what this was like, I guess.

    But this is just amazing. Real emotion. Real pain. Real sorrow. Real drama. Real story...REAL writing, on ADULT FANFICTION DOT NET. In fact, if one were to extract the entire lemon, I'd easily call it a perfect example of angst or tragedy fanfiction. I suppose even then the lemon has a purpose in all its explicitness, to really show the darkness of Raine's heart.

    Everything after the lemon, all the way to the end, with Raine's awful realization and her breakdown, is just haunting. I haven't been able to shake it off for hours now. You even left room for speculation at the end, whether she might possibly be on the road to redemption in the future, or whether she might just be headed for disaster.

    All I can say is, I loved this, and I wish all writers here could care for their fics as much as you do. I'd love to see more like this from you.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 19, 2006
    wow
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  • From KawaiiRanChan on September 03, 2006
    ...this is one of the most beautiful things I have ever read. I'm not just saying that, either. I felt Raine's pain the entire time. A fic where I like and identify with Raine? Hell.

    You wouldn't write a piece for me, would you?
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  • From ANON - loren on January 15, 2006
    sad ending.... kind of makes me wish i had a sister though!
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  • From ANON - Alexis on November 26, 2005
    O_O... I'm speechless. So good. Poor Raine! The ending is so sad. I really hope you develop this story, it has the potential to be very good. I like where you left it, also, because if you choose not to continue, it can still do well as a one-shot. Anyways. I had a particulary grand laugh at "birth canal" and "life wand", and I applaud you for coining such terms. Mhmm. Very funny. ^_^

    Anyways, great job!
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  • From ANON - sirchnotlih on November 22, 2005
    I have but one thing to say. Please, make another chapter or a sequel.
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