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Reviews for Against the Grain

By : Minwax
  • From Squeebunnie on May 08, 2009
    I want more please. Awsome story!
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  • From ANON - ENDGAME on August 27, 2008
    Awesome! I just KNEW someone was going to pop out with this idea and you did so beautifully. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Irxsk on April 03, 2008
    I enjoyed the first chapter best, but over well written. :) I'm glad someone decided the Dahaka needs to up all up on the Prince too lol
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  • From ANON - Jags on February 28, 2008
    THAT WAS INCREDIBLE! YOU MUST WRITE MORE AND EMAIL ME WHEN YOU HAVE! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!
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  • From ANON - K-Pilot on May 31, 2007
    Donkey Punch
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  • From Marionette on May 10, 2007
    There is a part of me (much larger than I would admit in polite company) that is a raging sadist. And it loves this story. I love how you've written the Dahaka. Perfect. I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Malyss on February 26, 2007
    Wow, I never would have thought of that... and I love it!! You write very well and you have a nice style. I can't wait for the next chapter (and the kinky sex that goes with it ;))
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  • From ANON - Casandra on February 03, 2007
    Can't wait for the next part wish there was an alret email to tell us when stories we like are updated on this site.I'll just keep coming back to check.
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  • From ANON - Nacht Kind on January 13, 2007
    ::scratching pitiously at screen:: Mooooreee......But, honestly, I'm thrilled to have such a prompt update, dispite your claims to the contrary.

    I'm glad to know my ideas were enjoyed, as I had far too much fun coming up with them. At present though, I can't think of anything to suggest, as you seem to have the immediate story well in hand.

    I find the Dahaka's typical irritation at human attempts to avoid and/or thwart its efforts vastly amusing; the calculating intelligence it employs highlights the darkly predatorial aspects of its nature and emphasizes its cunning. Dahaka equals terrifying apex predator. I think if I were faced with one, after making certain I wasn't asleep or having wild, Mad Hatter Tea induced hallucinations, I'd sit down and cry.....because, I mean really?

    I'm excited to see how the next chapter will progress, and to see what will ultimately happen to the Dahaka, the Prince, and the poor princess with remarkably bad timing.

    Phasen sehnen sich die Inspiration!
    Nacht
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  • From ANON - Huh? on January 06, 2007
    Why the epic writing of requests? Its about ribcage fucking.
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  • From ANON - Nacht Kind on January 04, 2007
    You know.....I was just saving my game after a run-in with The Big and Scary, when my sick and twisted little mind got the softest of inklings. Allow me to tell you, that, considering my actual hope of finding anything of this nature, I am incredibly well pleased.

    My more sadistic and perverse natures are highly satified; though, I must confess to a bit of cringing at the damage inflicted by tentacles in flesh and claws in delicate areas. I'd always found the Prince's appearance quite fetching, and he really is very flexible X3.

    If I might make a request, or perhaps suggestion: The unrestrained violence and mangling of the Prince and two females seemed reasonable at the time being read, he'd had no plans of further use of them. However, considering he obviously intends to recapture himself a Prince, might I suggest a slightly less homicidal method of intercourse? The Dahaka obviously feels some pride and possession toward the Prince, as he'd been the prey that had eluded him for so long, and probably has some distinctive feelings of "MINE"; I have no idea where he'd keep him, but I imagine the Island of Time must have some highly inaccessable and opulent rooms. If you're going to have a pet, you should treat it right. That doesn't mean the Prince won't fear him, obviously, because, not only is it a Dahaka that will probably inflict some physical harm on you at random intervals, it's using you intimately and you're virtually powerless to stop it.

    Now, as for tentacles, the mouth is another orifice that can be highly stimulating, not to metion simply rubbing against a toned and flexing body. You may also want to use tentacles to stimulate the Prince's erection, as that would free-up the Dahaka's hand(possibly to pet his prize), and/or to stretch the Prince as it would probably be more effective and less damaging, as well as enjoyable considering the apparent sensitivity of his extra appendages. Frequent damage of a severe nature may cause it to lose it's appeal and pleasure capabilities. Some sort of lubricant would also help, and likely increase the Dahaka's stimulation, as going dry tends to chafe and result in slower, more shallow thrusting. The Dahaka may gain inspiration for this from his recent encounters with women and their aiding natural lubrication. Palm oil was common, I'd suggest that, and it'd be easy to use with tentacles. Not to mention that proper lube and stretching will likely cause the Prince to enjoy it, and such pleasure will undoubtedly increase as the act is repeated and he grows more accustomed to the initial intrusions, perhaps even finding pleasure in their discomfort(it is a fine line, after all). Which may lead to all sorts of possible inner turmoil for the Prince, and his release of pheromones at his pleasure may cause the Dahaka to go into an absolute frenzy(he seems rather feral, and his partner going into "heat" would likely send him into a rut). This isn't to say that going dry wouldn't be appropriate if, say, the Prince tried to escape.....naïve little thing that he is.

    Please note that any of my ideas were simply suggestive, and meant in no offense. I'm truly enjoying your story thus far and just thought the feedback might, at the very least, be interesting. I apologize for rambling, and eagerly await your next update.

    Go, Dahaka! Go!
    Nacht
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  • From Squeebunnie on January 04, 2007
    Awsome story...it makes you think that the beast could acutally have feeelings and want something more than to be trapped by the timeline....please I want more!
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  • From ANON - demon 0 on December 02, 2006
    Plese write more thanks
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  • From ANON - I Love Eggs on November 22, 2006
    Amazing. I think you've really just outdone yourself this time. Plus, its kinda very hot.
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  • From ANON - Zetht on October 30, 2006
    I think it's good work. Yes, a happy ending indeed - I'd like to see it.

    I'm not reviewing because you asked for it, by the way, I'm reviewing because I liked the story and I'd like to see more of it. I'm sorry that you feel the need to hold your great work hostage for reviews. My personal sentiments are that the more work you do, the more reviews you'll get for it - and from what I've read, they will very likely be good ones.

    But no matter what you choose to do, thanks for sharing your work at all. It's nice to finally see some great writing on these sites.
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