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Reviews for The Truth Shall Set You Free

By : lissatyger
  • From WingsofaDream on December 02, 2008
    Considering you haven't updated anything in over two years, I'm probably wasting my time writing this but nothing ventured, nothing gained. On the off chance that you do read this, I'd like to ask if I can adopt this story as you seem to have no wish to complete it. I love it to bits and I'd love to see you finish it, but if you don't want to, I'd like to try it myself.

    But as I've said, you'll probably never read this. Oh well.
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  • From aisen on November 30, 2007
    Admittedly, I've only read the first chapter so far, so perhaps things changed later on.

    So far, it's quite cute, I just love the kissing scene and the smut scene is really well implemented however, the tense seems to constantly fluctuate between present and past tense -- while sometimes a fic could take a minor shift of tenses (e.g. if it was a flashback or reminiscence, or a different section entirely, like in The Death of Vishnu by Manil Suri.) I would really recommend picking a tense and sticking with it, it helps make it run more smoothly, and makes it less confusing. Getting a beta might help in this area, just ask around to your friends or in communities, because seriously? A good beta is invaluable.

    And don't worry, we all make these mistakes. That's what betas are for. I, for one, am very prone to run-on sentences, comma splices and and yes, tense errors of my own. I recently had a challenge piece of mine betaed and man, I missed some of the most obvious glaring errors, I was half embarrassed and half wanting a build a shrine for my beta XD;

    Anyways, I'll get to reading more when I'm not dead tired. Hope to see more updates soon ♥
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  • From ANON - Prince Bananafeather on January 04, 2007
    Woah...you need to update. NOW. *stares at screen* WHY ISN'T ANOTHER CHAPTER POPPING UP?! *cries in a corner* Ah, well. It was a pleasure reading this and you have some skill. And I'm glad that I've found someone who thinks that Rhys and Oscar are the type to trust! =^_^= Well, update soon, please. I'll probably have some withdrawal issues if you don't.
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  • From ANON - lugiamania on February 07, 2006
    Yay, another awesome chappy! I love how you put the side couplings in this. Just enough to provide a change of pace, but never detracting from the main plot. Good job!
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  • From ANON - Legendary Armor on February 05, 2006
    Woot! Getting better and better. Not so sure about the RhysTitania deal, but the hintings of OscarKieran are absolutely delightful! Can't wait for the next chapter ^^
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  • From ANON - Name? What Name? on February 03, 2006
    Awww...what an adorable chapter!

    I love your implied pairings...I'm assuming Rhys/Titania and Oscar/Kieran are included in that, maybe Rolf/Mist or Jill/Mist as well? Everyone was very well in-character in that last chapter. I especially liked your Boyd...it just seemed very like him to say things like that.

    I wonder when Soren will tell Ike the truth...and since you seem to be following the game script, will Nasir (or maybe Stefan) influence him in any way?

    Nice job once again. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Steinerboo on February 02, 2006
    Kieran and Oscar (sorta) huh? I do enjoy those two (mostly because they're so damned useful once they've got an A support though). I am totally intrigued by this whole "Oscar has a tragic past lovelife" idea. Do tell more! Not as sure of what I think of Rhys and Titainia, but I'm glad she finally sort of approves.
    Update soon, please, with more smut, if possible. And when is Soren going to tell Ike the truth? That should be fun. This is one of my favorite stories - even though it skips the plot in favor of some off-the-bat smut, the whole situtation seems oddly believable, I don't know if it's because of the Fire Emblem universe in general, or if it's that you put it in the middle of the very stressful war situation.
    Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Name? What Name? on January 24, 2006
    They're so cute. ^_^ Great job, you do smut well. Soren seems a little OOC at times, but it's not too bad and it's understandable considering the circumstances of the story. Hope to see more from you soon.
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  • From ANON - Vinny the Vampire on January 22, 2006
    I love this story! They have mist's approval and there was SMUT! WHOOO!

    Soren and Ike are so cute together! I wondering about the others still becoming very interested in their thoughts.

    ooh they love eachh other not wanting the other to die! HOW CUTE! Dying for more!

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  • From ANON - Anon on January 08, 2006
    i absolutely love this story so far!!

    And i agreee with you about the fact that it is obvious that Ike and Soren liked each other

    Please continue to update!!
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  • From ANON - R Amythest on January 01, 2006
    Sweet, as always! ^^

    And, infuriated!Soren is cute for some reason. I don't know why.
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  • From ANON - Vinny the Vampire on December 29, 2005
    My poor Soren! He's going to break up with Ike so he can protect him! He's so loving!

    I love this story and wonder when Soren will reveal his secret to Ike. So cute! Rhys was in perfect character. He acst the way I would expect him too.

    And Mist the girl who always is confused, perfectly done. I can't wait for the next chapter! Please continue on!
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  • From on December 28, 2005
    *SQUEEEEEEEEE*

    Okay, sorry. I just wuff Soren, though... ^_^ And Ike...

    Anyway, the one thing that bugged me is that there's no mention of Rolf, though you've brought up all the other characters. Somehow, though, with Rolf's level of innocence, I can already see him saying "Well, being with him makes you happy, right? So what's wrong with it?" ...*Giggles like a schoolgirl at the image*

    ~Garlyle Wilds
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  • From ANON - The Empress on December 24, 2005
    Awwwww. The sweetness of it all. I'm so happy for Soren and Ike. I pictured them in my mind and they are so cute together.*wants to hug both of them but doesn't because she knows Soren would fry her ass* Too bad Princess. *evil snicker* Although I do kinda sorta feel bad for her. *trying not to smirk* I hope she finds someone else to love. *Hightly doubts it* Unless she goes for Geoffry *probably spelled wrong*. I know he loves her to death. =)
    Btw, I like your story. It's really cute. ^_~
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  • From ANON - Vinny the Vampire on December 19, 2005
    I love this story because I adore SorenXIke. I haven't completed the game yet but I feel such a strong connection between these two.

    I love this story and the rections of others is spot on. LOL! Boyd's reaction is very fitting of his character! Poor Rolf wouldn't understand! lol!

    I love how you make them go public, it is so cute! Continue on with this smashing story!
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