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Reviews for All Things Come to an End

By : LinkSage
  • From ANON - Riven Liether on September 02, 2006
    As far as the whole rape thing goes, the women who do receive pleasure during such incidents usually experience it as a defense mechanism. Basically, one of two things happens: you either shut down completely, or your mind induces pleasurable sensations, in order to block out the pain and trauma of being violated. But an important thing to remember is that the latter is far more common in instances where the victim has been raped multiple times, and is very rare during a first offense, unless she is aquainted with the man. Personally, I think you downplayed the actual effect that rape would have on a virgin. I've been told by someone with experience in the matter that there is nothing in the world more painful. So, that whole chapter would have made much more sense had she not been a virgin, and this not been the first time Ingo had violated her.

    Other than that, though, excellent work, and I look forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - Xavier_Price on July 23, 2006
    When ever I read a story as well written as this, I'm always amazed when the author says something about how "bad" or "unreal" it is. In the Chapter 3 A/N you said you used only what you've read/seen. Well, you got a rape scean pretty accurate... As for the rest of the chapters, very well written, the character's are all constant, and the sceans flow nicely. I like the way you have the surroundings blend with the story and not detract from it with overly-uneccisary detail. Keep it up, and am looking forward to the next chapters!
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  • From ANON - ElderScroll-FAN on February 10, 2006
    er, I just posted on here under the name Anon. I am not the Anon whos been fighting with Link Fan, but if you dont put your name in the name area when reviewing it always comes up as Anon. Anyways, like I said, nice and good, keep it up :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 10, 2006
    nice, good, accurate(sp). :)
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  • From ANON - Rebecca on January 28, 2006
    WOW! this is the first time i have been on this site and your story was the one that looked the best and omg was i right!
    yeah, i just wanna say that your story was amazing and i`m dead jelouse coz i wish i could write like that lol.
    i hope you continue to do more!
    Becca xXx
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  • From ANON - link fan on January 17, 2006
    yah what phenoix said i just really like reading. im like OBSESSED with it u know when something really good comes up and it sayes to be continued? its like that feeling ecept with books, so ill try to hold back on the reviews
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  • From ANON - pheonix on January 16, 2006
    I apologise on my part LS, I was just trying to explain something.... (Sorry if I looked like a insane freak over it... i have a thing for over doing stuff/arguements) *Trys to restrain from playing rough*

    Anyway so i'm not just taking up personal space on the review board 5 star job. Can't wait till next update.
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  • From LinkSage on January 16, 2006
    Anon, please stop being so immature. If Link fan wants to leave a ton of reviews, that's fine. I really don't mind. But for you to start argueing, and impersonating other members? It's really, really stupid on your part. Surely you have better things to do than argue with people in a story's review section?

    I appreciate your reading of my fic. But please refrain from being an ass to other readers, k? Thanks.

    That goes for Pheonix and Link Fan, too. Play nice, guys. I don't want to have to remove more reviews than I already have.
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  • From ANON - pheonix on January 14, 2006
    Can't wait till the next update. Love the details/etc. Of the story keep up the great work. *Again no further comments...

    You are very welcome LF. I've been in a few fighs with Anon before...
    (He acts like a imature brat himself. Acting like whatever he thinks is always right such as a comment about 9/11

    saying anyone believing in God is a God **** retard) (As you can see I'm a little religous but if he wants to make such immature comments, or using asshole comments to start fight, he should be banned) (He is a troll just ignore Anon at all costs)

    Again ***** star job... (Didn't read the fourth chapter before on a time accident)

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  • From ANON - link fan on January 14, 2006
    sorry i havent reviewed in a while ive ither just been too busy or i forgot :P and thanks to phenoix for sticking up for me angainst the battle with Anon lol anyway great new chapter 4 linksage ^^
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  • From ANON - Juno on January 10, 2006
    wow. This is the real review.

    Id like to thank the author for alluding to me in his author's note. Great story, nice plot. Like to see how Link will react when he finds out about the rape... Im sure youve got somethign good in mind.

    Keep it up

    ~Juno
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  • From ANON - Koo on January 10, 2006
    Well!

    This is very good! I'm enjoying it alot! Keep up the good work! ^_^
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  • From ANON - pheonix on January 09, 2006
    Anon leave them alone BTW Link fan is who you were trying to say that comment too. LS had nothing to do with it.

    Great story I liked/enjoyed it... (not much else to say sorry...)

    BTW Anon just because he is hyped over the story doesn't make him 12 years old/etc. Who said he was hyped on sex? He just wanted another chapter. *Accusations like that could get you banned* *Anon you are the one acting immature over what LF said so if you are a mature adult like you should be/think you are just drop it because you know when you right and he is wrong!*

    I do agree Link Fan way too many reviews for one story, but hey we all have our own ways of showing like/gratitude for something. (Is there really any limit rule to posting reviews for one story? No so leave him be. "Its better to have had then to have had not"

    keep up the great work ***** stars.
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  • From ANON - Jay on January 08, 2006
    Dude, u are all little bitches. let the guy write what he wants, and stop bitching at eachother through reviews. it wastes time and is REALLY annoying. besides, i think hed probably like more reviews of what hes writing and suggestions rather than just forcing him to write more. LinkSage: your writing is very advanced and is very well written, but why would link let Malon go to do stuff for Ingo when he knows Ingo's messed up?. GJ on the last chapter.
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  • From ANON - LinkSage on January 07, 2006
    Erm... OO"
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