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By : YamiKaiyoh
  • From Darkravenrose on June 03, 2017

    I must know what happens next?!


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  • From ANON - on July 14, 2016

    This is an amazing story! I love it! Cant wait to read more!


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  • From bella1990 on October 06, 2011
    o-omigosh pleeeeeeeease tell me you're going to continue this! *A*
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  • From Spirit1 on August 04, 2007
    I...MUST...SEE...MORE...OF...THIS...CUTE...STORY! I think Shadow/Manic is simply ADORABLE!
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  • From ANON - Dezwyler on August 21, 2006
    Wow! I think I love this! I've bookmarked it and will be coming back regulaly for update!! ^^

    Dezwyler
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  • From ANON - randomperson32 on February 13, 2006
    plz keep writting i love this fic soo much
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  • From ANON - foxfire on February 03, 2006
    up date soon please!
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  • From ANON - Sonmanic-Slave on January 18, 2006
    So happy to help in this. ^^ It's a wonderful story, keep writing. You are a great author after all.
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  • From KamirineGoddess on January 18, 2006
    Interesting piece of fiction! Keep it coming.
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  • From ANON - Xiander_s on January 18, 2006
    Ha, bitchin story! Grammer and spelling mistakes, but then, who doesn't have them so don't worry. I don't really like Manic that much but you've made him interesting so I give you top marks for that alone. Your Shadow rocks and Sonic needs to be put in his place--then there should be plenty of hawt sex. And I'm done. Update soon, kay?
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  • From ANON - sonicxxxx on January 17, 2006
    nice story
    shadowxsonic roxs in my opinion more manicxsonic!!! brotherly lerve!
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  • From ANON - Maddi_Chan on January 17, 2006
    Interesting. Sonic makes me laugh in this story. I could just picture him being wild and wanting to be free. But Manic should like, care somewhat for Sonic and vise-versa. Shadow's pretty awsome though.
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  • From ANON - Harley Quinn hyenaholic on January 17, 2006
    And that was my review. Honest.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 17, 2006
    Nothing big, but I'd think that the backside isn't too great a place to be branded. After all, the slave brand would have to be seen easily, without stripping what might not be a slave. So a better place would be the cheek, or the back of the hand. What is an asphixiolac (or whatever) anyway?

    My only real grump about this is that Manic does seem a bit apathetic about all of this. Sure, he's a willing slave, nicely broken in. But this IS his brother we're talking about who is about to get a good beating. Family, you know.

    Other than those two little complaints, keep up the good work! Just so you know, 5 stars! And believe me, I do know the difference between complete shit and something that just needs a little more thought to become really good.
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  • From ANON - Sonmanic-Slave on January 08, 2006
    YAY!!! THANK YOU!!

    Continue soon, please!!! PLEASE!!
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